I just wanted to let u know that I love this story and can't wait for more.

Ha! The Panthers.

Edward’s games are going well. He scored a goal! Fingers crossed! DTOW! I predict there will be no sex embargo’s for any of the team!

Ugh! Jacob. Bella did good! Glad Royce was with her to witness full on Jake.

Well who will be Bella’s father? Royce Sr or his brother?

Thank you for writing.

Roy seems very interested in Bella’s life. Very interested. I wonder if he’s not her bio father…those photos in Royce’s office.

Thank you for writing.

Hmmmmm

I'm thinking roy knows and that's why he's in bellas business but at the sametime idk if roy is thatinto fam cuz Look what he did to jr and alice... speaking of alice how is edward connected or related to alice...its more than him playing on the team i just forgot how.

Oh wow. I was thinking that maybe Roy was her father, but maybe he’s her uncle. There is definitely a reason why he pulls out a lot of stops for her and the meal was a way of getting to know her family in a sort of relaxed setting. Tbh Bella has definitely got some of Roy’s traits as Jason has pointed out, so she is definitely a King, and the play on the false name was very clever. Debbie

So Roy IS her dad? I actually like this twist, I think both her and Royce will benefit from being siblings...and I'm thinking a Ms Leah will steal a certain "brothers" heart!

Oh how I love this couple so very much! I have my spidey senses on alert that someone Bella knows already is her biological dad!

I always reread the last update a second time so I can refresh my memory before the new
chapter. I was sure Bella was Roy's daughter when Bella met Bonnie, that she probably acted
like her grandmother. It wasn't until Bella was looking at the pictures in Roy's office during this
chapter that I guessed she might be his niece. I figure if Bonnie noticed the similarities between
Bella and her friend that Roy might have noticed them also and possibly did some investigating.
Getting her DNA and having it tested would have been easy for him. I don't recall Bella's exact
age, I think she is about thirty. Is the Brandon estate his wife's family estate? Since Peter was with his wife over thirty years and he used Brandon as an alias, I'm going to assume he was possibly married when he had his fling with Renee. I have mixed feelings about that and I wonder how Alice will take it. I was thrilled that Bella and Alice might be cousins and am even more thrilled that they
might be sisters. That will probably be exciting for them since they grew up without any. Will Alice feel compelled to share the estate? Will Bella refuse?
I'm looking forward to going back to read both these stories again when this one is finished. I'm a little disappointed that there are only about 5 chapters left.
Thanks for the update!

Way to score Edward! I’m so glad she put Jake in his place. And could Roy Sr possibly be her father. I can’t wait to find out!

What a wonderful chapter nit to much drama with the exception of Bella putting Jacob in his place! That was awesome! A great dinner party fantastic games! And Bonnie helping with some info about who might be her father!

Omg omg omg ! Are you gonna … is it really HIM?! Le SWOON!

Good

Dont tell me Roy is going to be her Dad. If he is her biological father, does he know? Great update.

This isn't a shocking revelation to me, but I'm excited to see where it goes! I'm also excited for Edward and the team. It's their dream come true!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan