Reviews for A Dark Year |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. Thanks for the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, that's it! I have now read ALL your stories ... some more than once. ALL your stories currently on this site. CURRENTLY ... on THIS site. Unless you are on another site, I believe that it is high time for you to write more on this one! PLEASE?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, A Dark Year and I was truly impressed by the storytelling, character depth, and vibrant visuals. It’s clear a lot of passion went into creating it. As a digital artist with 4 years of experience in comic book art, I specialize in transforming traditional stories into high-quality digital masterpieces. From optimizing each panel for web publishing to creating digital prints or interactive formats, I ensure your original vision shines through in every detail. If you're interested in bringing your story into the digital realm, let’s collaborate! I work on a commission basis, so we can tailor the project to your needs. Looking forward to connecting! You can reach me on Discord: alimaggoon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This would probably be my favorite haphne fic if not for the first half. While the premise of Daphne herself dealing with a 'dark year' in hogwarts is interesting, her interactions with many other characters seem out of character for the way she is written in the second half, with Neville particularly. With how thorough and meticulous she is with 'liking' someone, for her to fancy Neville and the entire thing be done and dusted within 1 paragraph seemed weird if nothing else, and there is no mention of it at any other point in the story, with the 2nd half even reducing the chances of a "relationship" into merely a friendship. It definitely feels like a weird writing choice Outside of that, the 2nd half is really well written, the romance portion is a whirlwind true and true but for some reason just sits well with the 2 leads, overall it's a great fic let down a bit by it's first half |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent storytelling with a criminally low number of favourites and reviews :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved Daphne's in this story. Also you did a great JOB writing it in my opinion. Question: Ever considered writing a Luna and Harry story...possibly going further than 7th year? |
![]() ![]() Why does she have a cloak of invisibility do you not know the law how it was passed down by ignotus through the potter line from his daughter |
![]() ![]() 7 years of build up for harry being chosen one and a randomer just take he place |
![]() ![]() Great you take away the main plot point about harry and just give it to daphne |
![]() ![]() All years at hogwarts are dark years |
![]() ![]() ![]() For page breaks where there's a line, people usually just type in "Line Break" in some form of it, or have their own variant for line breaks. Assuming that's what ur talking about. Oh, enjoyed the story btw. Nice read, different POV from Harry. It was nice to read Daphne POV. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great googly moogly, Luna has learned the great mystic arts of Lesbomancy... |
![]() ![]() Hey man I don't usually leave reviews actually this is my first but of all the stories fanfics and novels i ahve read I must none of them has gotten this close to me , thanjs for the story , and thanks for the hardwork you must have put through |
![]() ![]() This was a really good story. You managed to focus on another character (Daphne) as the main character, and not have her overshadow Harry, while maintaining the story as her journey. That’s a pretty tough balance. Wild that I’m just coming across this in its completed form. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry potter fanon is seriously annoying. They just really love the idea of bashing characters. God you really created a simple but beautiful story. Good work |