Reviews for Curse of Justice
Fan chapter 8 . 7/30/2022
Please genderbend gojo
Cadmus8 chapter 8 . 7/31/2022
Cool story
Anonymous Mastermind chapter 8 . 7/30/2022
I was wondering will shirou change his chant/aria for unlimited blade works during the course of the story and does using cursed energy instead of prana affect unlimited blade works in any way.
SentinalSlice chapter 8 . 7/30/2022
I loved the training method you came up with. Having Shirou launch swords at himself!
Yeet chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
Nice chap
ProfesorGoblitz chapter 8 . 7/29/2022
Here’s a question, since Magic circuits connect the body and soul, and the reality marble is the manifestation of the user’s soul, doesn’t that mean shirou would be aware of the outline of his soul, which means he would be able to hurt mister patch work face curse?
Kayen1024 chapter 8 . 7/29/2022
nice chapter, you know it is seriously refreshing to see Shirou be so much more open in the usage of his magecraft. It's also amusing to see Shirou make silly mistakes.
NoNameReviewer chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
This us kinda late to one on your responses but the Image of any objects does not have ny correlation to how long it has been projected. It is true that if the image in his head does not correspond to the projection it would disappear, like if the sword was broken ir cracked, but time and amount doesn't hold any meaning to it

UBW
"“—Trace, on.”
I activate the completed blueprint and reproduce the twin swords using my image.
…What a bad job.
The twin swords I once thought were perfect are too unprecise compared to his.
An inferior illusion will become a delusion.
Probably…
My swords will shatter and disappear when they crash against his"

"It’s blocked and destroyed as well.
We have the same swords and the same techniques, but there is a gap that I cannot fill.
—Did you think my Kanshō and yours are equal? Your assumptions of the basic structure are too weak.
Even if you get the appearance and the composition materials down, it is a matter of course for it to be destroyed if the structure is not reasoned out. Even an image falters if it is illogical.”"

If you want Shirou's traced object to disappear just say that since they were damaged or broken the image of Shirou falters and it would disapear. Another would be that since in the heat of battle Shirou doesn't project it perfectly leading to said sword being more "flawed" thus more breakable. But the end of Ubw Shirou already went past this by reasoning out that instead of using the steps of projection to trace he should just directly pull them out of UBW

For the fic itself, I would reccomend putting more description on the surrounding of characters or small acrions or descriptions of action. For example in Shirou's training you describe him in the middle of the forest but throughout the entire training it was as if Shirou was training in an open field. No trees, branches, roots or even ground was described when he was acrobating in dodging the swords. Was Shirou just flying through the air throughout the entire exercise? In canon with Tokyo vs the Kyoto students we get to see Yuji getting sent onto trees with punches, using branches to leverage himself or enemies jumping on tress for higher ground.

Especially on recent manag chapters where the environment is very much used in fights. Those things are missing here, not just in fights, making it feel like characters are talking or fighting in a plain vaccuum and waiting for the other to respond

Ooohh, we're meeting the second years. Is Yuta still here? Assuming since Yuji and Nobara are still "far off"

Also fun fact Shirou can trace objects that literally hold more mana than himself
"「... hnn.
In that case, was it a matter of chance that I was able to Project Saber's sword?
... if I think about it, the amount of mana accumulated within that sword was off by an order of magnitude.
That I'd be able to replicate a quantity of mana several hundred times my own - it's strange no matter how I look at it.」"

Guy can probably go trace a full cursed energy powered sword of Yuta and be able to copy even the cursed energy put there by him despite using the minumum amount of energy to trace it. There was a reason his tracing was called out as breaking the rules of equivalent exchange
PSYCongroo chapter 8 . 7/28/2022
Thanks for the chapter.
steel35 chapter 8 . 7/28/2022
Wouldn't be Shirou if he doesn't nearly kill himself while training, also I can imagine Nanamis and the schools reaction to Shirou pulling an arrow with the power of a small nuke wouldn't go over too well with them. Having Shirou trying to relax while remembering his friends and family really cements the fact that hes alone in another world with no hope of going back to his original world does hurt, hopefully he can get out of this rut that he'll be finding himself in; and of course the diet student he meets is the glutton of the group so it looks like he'll have his work cut out for him in the kitchen once again. I do like the relationship that Shirou and Nanami are building up together, Nanami has been my favorite character in JJK since they introduced him because he's not just a teacher but a pillar for the Jujutsu world as someone that guides others and prepares them for trials of the real world instead of sheltering them which is something that Shirou would need. Keep up the great work!
ChocoMacarons chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
It's ironic because Panda has the same voice actor as Gilgamesh lol
samjingsung chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
Nice chapter.

Like the pace, would like it to continue like this for several more chapters.

And, poor Shirou. He must've been feeling lonely luckily a Panda is there for him.

Also, I'm delighted that you knew about the 'suicide fighting style' because I swear I see it everywhere. Even Reddit was aware of it and made a meme about it.

I don't know what to write, to be honest, but I don't wanna read and then leave soon after. I intend to leave a review as a reminder that I've read this chapter too.
Bashleyz chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
Good. I wait the next.
WN-Bruh chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
Thanks for the chapter!
Dark Spidey chapter 8 . 7/27/2022
When I saw yesterday passed and no chapter arrived I was a bit worried since you have always shown to be very punctual. But imagine my shock when this shows up on my phone's feed. So onto the review.

To me it felt short but maybe it's because I have been dying to see more of this story and the wait have made it felt short. But that is really minor, I liked that the experience with Hanami forced both Shirou and Nanami to grow in their own unique way. Shirou is experimenting with cursed energy and his od, while Nanami had to grit his teeth and ask for a rival school's help to learn how to do simple domain.

Heck even the little back and forth with Nanami and Kusakabe's was well done. Even the latter being curious and interested in what lit a fire underneath the ex salary man's ass. So imagine his shock when the newest recruit was the cause because he refused to give up and die. Just because an enemy was superior. This of course inspires Nanami to grow from his weakness and want to do and be better. Domain expansion almost got them killed, so it helps to learn a counter to it for future conflicts.

Maybe a memory of his time as a student flashed in his mind, and one of his friend's. Who was sent on a mission to deal with a wrongly graded curse, lost his life because he was not prepared. So that forces him to swallow his pride and take a step forward to a greater height of new strength.

Shirou learning simple domain and new shadow style the way he did was down right hilarious. Especially when he explains the reasoning why he did what he did. To both of their shock and I am sure Nanami picked up the implication behind that tidbit of information. Meaning that so long as a person is user a weapon against Shirou and they use a technique that is not innate. It is very possible for him to copy it. Provided they are using an impliment of sorts. He would also get an idea of what level they are at in terms of fighting. Along with really bad habits.

Sure it's limited to those who use impliments and tools but given how vast the jujutsu world is. That will be the difference between life and death. An copying other useful cursed toos and the like would be extremely useful. Giving him alot or context and information that the average or experienced person would never know. Such as if Shirou laid eyes on the broken, scraped remains of the inverted spear of heaven. He would see the tough time it gave someone like Gojo Satori, and how it nearly almost killed him. An how it protected a non sorcerer from the effects of a domain expansion. Along with the skills of Toji Fushigoro. I personally would like if Gojo kept such a thing as a constant reminder that despite his vast strength and power. He is still very much mortal and he can still be killed if the right circumstances align.

Shirou reminiscing on how he was used to eating at a full table with his friends and love ones. Only to find that he is not home anymore, but rather another world with none of what he previously knew. No doubt lit up some serious hurt and reminded him that he is alone for now. But that will eventually change the more he cements himself here.

Also his cliffhanger meeting put a smile on my face. You really have a thing for keeping folks in character yet at the same time, branching out or building on what is already there. An I hope you never lose that. Keep up the amazing work, again this chapter was well worth the wait and I hope you are in good health. Thank you for the upload!
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