Oh, this is a good fic. I've been waiting for a jjk/fate fanfic for a while now and this one's one of the more decent one. Hope to see it grow and flourish soon.

Also why hasn’t he used black keys yetand holy energy is powerful enough to oneshot cursed spirits

You really need to reread up on EMIYA skills and np if your giving them to shirou also he has a couple of weapons that ingnore or cancel supernatural effects

god DAMN that fight scene was TOO FUCKING LONG

I'm pretty sure given Caldabolg II's properties, if that actually detonated near/struck Gojo it'd damage him though infinity lmao, simply because it "Twist/Distorts Space", and as Sukuna made clear, doesn't matter if there's an "Infinite" amount of it, if it's there, and it can be cut/messed with, Gojo can be reached and/or harmed. Anyway, just thought I'd share because it'd be a cool interaction. With that, this seems pretty interesting and I'm definitely curious to see where it goes. Hope you're doing well and that more will be added soon.

Thanks again,

~GNL~

I absolutely love this story and season 2 has rekindled my love for Jujutsu Kaisen

Please update it, you have a talent for it that has become all too rare nowadays on FFnet

Damn this is really good. Prob the best jjk fic I've read so far. Not that there's many yet.

I really like this fic. The story, concept and writing have me hooked (I also admit that I'm both jjk/fate fan, so that's a plus for me).

I wonder how you are going to handle Sukuna, and the inevitable Shibuya Incident. (Oh I can't wait for that, even if it two years before this fic reach that point). It's going to be fun seeing the King of Curses react to something that is absolutely outside his experience.

Damn that was hilarious, more shirougojo interactions please

Neat story loving the interactions and I hope you decide to update this soon really can't wait for more.

I have enjoyed your story, the writing is well done and the pace of the story is good. If you don't continue the story that's alright, but it is pretty good.

Yeah i think im dropping this for now, good premise and could be better with a few tweaks but the format is hard to read

Ok yeah, i think i know where this is going, i really dont like Shirou getting wayy to OP

cursed energy / mana

I think this needs more formatting randomly switching POVs so often in the middle of the something ruins in the reading experience, shirou feels a little OOC here but dont worry that happens to all of us.

One of my complains is how quickly the whole thing went, a bunch of dialogue is skipped and looks like you are speedrunning the plot, you have to take it easy and build up stuff

(for example shirou learning how to use cursed energy and fighting a special grade curse doesnt feel right with how fast things are going, not to mention revealing one of his trump cards and magecraft IN THE FIRST MISSION yeah just no)

(Other example is giving shirou knowledge he shouldnt have access to, like arturia name and other routes stuff, it just doesnt feel right, not to mention joining the sorcerer academy just like that and randomly finding a finger)

I think it would have been much better if he simply just happened to run into some random civilian getting attacked by a curse and killing it (because hero of justice thing) , catching the attention of a sorcerer and therefore starting the plot, with his motivation of joining the academy being to find a way back home by gathering intel from this world. Also get rid of the whole void voice thing it just annoying.

Focus on building the story instead of just speedrunning it, write longer chapters and for god sake stop changing POVs in the middle of something, if you other character POVs in your story so much do an omake of a character asking themselves about Shirou.

Regardless not bad for a first fic, i think it can be better with a few rewrites

beautifully written update please