10/10
Thanks for the hard work !

what a stupid two shot.

A really interesting and unusual story. I really enjoyed Harry’s initial confusion and the realisation. Thank you for sharing your story

This was Fabulous! A new hero... Sybil is written Canon or ignored.
NICE

Trelawney as the secret hero! I've not seen that before! Well done.

Love the story

A great twist on that one character!

I could easily see SPT being an overall mastermind, in much the same way of some of the HP/LL fics I’ve read. Probably my favorite of that type is Harry Potter and the Stargate, a HP/SG-1 crossover by Sinyk that has Luna as a seer.

An enjoyable short story thanks for the add

Professor Trelawney having been a pawn to the prophecy was something I didn’t see coming. I also didn’t see that Harry wasn’t really a much bigger outcast and it being a vision coming. Good to see that Professor Trelawney plans to use her true talents for good intentions. Great story, keep up the hard work!

Harry found out the hard way that his doormat-like behavior and letting others’ opinions influence got himself into that mess. But with Daphne’s help, he can get the mess cleaned up. Great chapter, keep up the hard work!

Nice plottwist!
And nice to have a version of their future where Ginny is bad without it all being tied up with love potions

A wonderful two-shot, indeed!

I've never personally put much thought into Trelawney so this was actually a very good and suprising read. thank you.

A good story, I enjoyed it very much