Reviews for Manus Inferni |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is brilliant so far! Looking forward to seeing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it thus far wish there was more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't remember if I dropped a review for this chapter or not, so this is a test! Here's hoping to see the rise of a new age for demigods under the shrewd guidance of the Emperor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fact this title for the chapter means he head to "who the fuck actually cares" and not "protecting family" and destroying the legion except for the 5th who harmed his 5th family means he has disgraced his so call uncle in every single way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written but shit storyline... so many cursed for no fucking reason, so much just fucking skipped becuase of the stupid bullshit at the start of the story. Clearly now Naruto needs to get strong enough to return to the legion just to burn it to the fucking ground like in this story it no deserves. Not one fucking idiot in it has the right to live after the suicide shit the did to the 5th. this chapterwell written but like the last half or so of last chapterutterly fucking disturbing, wrong, evil, sick, twisted. Giving this one last chance in chapter 3 to fix this bullshit before I just move on. so far while the writer is excellent in there ability to write, the storyline just absolutely sucks so far. This ain't even a Naruto story, just some shit head who should have done more and told the fuck wits on the council to fuck themselves and jump on a sword. The only part this is Nautro is his name. No chakra, nothing from the Nation's. This isn't a naurto crossover but a Percy Jackson story without a crossover with just some au names. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok... what the fuck kind of bullahit is at the start of this chapter. They wish it didn't effect them, the with this didn't happen. what the actual fuck is this. At this point they have zero reason to stay in the legion and every fucking reason to see it destroyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First chapter while while written... just shows the legion is nothing but fuck wads who need the gods to beat the ever living shit out of them and teach them about respect of the others... how the treat the 5th honestly makes this while we'll written, just an ok story since it IS major bullshit how they are acting. Naruto or Laura or any of them should have told the fuck wit idiots to shove it up there ass. now ... if any of the 5 in the next chapter don't make it back... it goes from ok to.. needs major work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I drove once before LMAOO that'll be fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is going to be driving. I pray for their sanity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter. |
![]() ![]() This chapter was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see this updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. Talking about this with you and planning some stuff out made me hella excited for what was coming, and man, reading it now, the wait was worth it. Man lived up to the hype. Can't wait until you get further into the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! And I love you addressed something a few chapters back it made no sense Athena stuck to zeus side after he nearly killed annabeth aside from having soft spot for heroes annabeth is her favourite child. |