Reviews for The Last Marauder
riverrat chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
I'm glad you got inspired to write this. It is a great story.
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Nods. Yet Snape is what made the Marauders possible-he was what united them. After all, he was such a good victim-never gave up fighting, but always lost.

Good one-shot.
Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
I liked that last part:

Lupin smiled twistedly. "James died first. Peter is dead too as far I'm concerned. And now Padfoot…" He raised his eyes suddenly to meet Snape's. "I'm the last one. The last marauder."

Angsty yet interesting, I enjoyed it. _
MoonlitLupine chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
that was absolutely... woderful. it was realistic, it fit in with the story, and it made perfect sense. you portrayed their personalities quite well, and you just tried to make it blend, which it did. i couldn't have written it better myself. it was excellent.

~marauders forever~

from: the very sad, slightly upset, and cunningly clever another_marauder!
Iva1201 chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
Perfect! Snape wasn't allowed to go - I like you for this part. So many people write him as if it was his fault...
RhiannonLove chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
It's hard finding very good fanfics, where every bit seems as if it is merely a part J.K. Rowling wrote, but then omitted from the final copy of the book . . . Bravo, then. I really liked this. It was quite sad; poor Remus!
Pirate Perian chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I usually avoid fics with titles like "The Last Marauder" like the plague, only because I'm almost certainly that if I read another Remus-grieves-over-Sirius fic, I will implode. But having just finished your high-school adaptation of Phantom, I figured I'd give it a shot.

And what do you know? It's not at all what I expected. I love the conversation between Severus and Remus. You have them both perfectly in character: Severus' barely-controlled rage and Remus' studied composure. And I love the broaching of the subject of the Pensieve scene - especially Severus' unwillingness to reply.

*snerk* And the Opera-Voice hex... good lord, now I'm getting horrid mental images of Sirius impersonating Erik...
Perry chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
Great story, I love it! Both of them are very in-character too, wonderful job. Update soon!
S chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
That was nice. Very nicely written ficlet. One of the things I was left wondering after OOtP was Lupin's and Snape's reaction to Black's death.

I have to say, I personally think Snape would show more glee than we see in your story, but I can see this happening as well, quite easily. After all, even though he's not openly gloating over it, Snape sheds no tears and there are hints of other emotions, evident in parts like "trying to rein in his simmering temper" and "some lingering respect for the recently dead made him swallow the other accusatory words", as well as your use of other expressions. So he stays in character nicely.

By the way, I like the word "lingering" there. Makes perfect sense, considering his past, that his approach to death differs from that of normal people.

Lupin's sorrow is touching. Just the sort of silent pain I would expect from him. Poor fellow. This ficlet didn't bring me to tears, but the last phrase, "I'm the last one. The last marauder." almost did it. I'm left feeling melancholy. You've created the atmosphere very well!

Oh and may I make a plea regaring Forgive and Forget. I love the story and would like to see it become completed. Yes, I know, I haven't been much of a reviewer - I'm a habitual lurker, naughty me. But pretty please...?
dragonsprincess chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
That was beautiful, completely beautiful. I finished readin gthe book ttwo days after ita came out, and I'm still in shock about the fact that she killed off Sirius, I figured that she would eventually, but not before his innocence was proven to the Wizarding World. I just liked Sirius so much.


luna sinistra chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
this is great!

i hope you write more. it's good to see a somewhat nicer side of snape. if you like reading about the marauders as much as you like reading about them, then read my fanfic(only 2 chapters, for now) titled Luna Sinistra.
alison-pen chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
i am sorry for using the review section to ask u a question. The story is very nice. I want to ask u a question. Wat is the code for ?

tt's all. The story is nice. sad though
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Damn...poor remus...yikes great story...and i still wish she hadn't of done that to him...*sob*
Littletiger chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
So sad...

Very real, human vignette you've written here. Yes, JKR's given her readers much food for thought and imagination. I do hope you'll continue writing fanfiction, as you are a skilled writer. I especially like your response to Severitus' challenge. Say you'll finish it...pretty please?
frozenfemale chapter 1 . 7/1/2003

this is good...

o... my, i do wish Sirius hadn't died... anyway... this was nice...
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