Reviews for The Last Shinto Kami |
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![]() ![]() gostei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! The concept is unique and well-developed, and your character work is top-notch :) I really enjoy all of the interactions between the gods and naruto. I look forward to the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() can we get artemis meeting izanami cha9s and ancalagon soon heh. i cant waitnfor all the dragons and stuff. more please when you have the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story idk why it keeps deleting itself this is like the 6th time it disappeared from my downloads, but I really love the story. I'm kinda wondering how strong Naruto is if he went all out and had something to protect |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story ! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE THIS STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story, and I definitely recommend it! Looking forward to Athena, Artemis, and Naruto collab, it'll maybe help him feel better to make stuff to help people when he couldn't before. Question though, is Artemis still gonna be a virgin goddess later on down the storyline? I doubt Naruto would mind celibacy, but I'm curious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, ingeresting to see whats behind the disease or rather “who” if my guess is correct |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto and Artemis’ relationship flourishes. It won’t be long til they officially become a couple. Curious to see how Apollo would react to their relationship. Also hoping to see this universe’s version of Kurama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to know you're alright. I look forward to whatever you write next, your writing is phenomenal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad that I found you as an author! Your stories are amazing. The first story I read of yours was your Marvel one, and I noticed how much love and care you put into it, as well as how much knowledge you have of the subject matter. I mean, if you ever come back to the Marvel story, that would be very much welcome, but I'm glad that I didn’t do what I normally do when it comes to an author. When they have a story that's in my top 10, I tend to not read their other stories and just reread that one. I'm so glad I didn’t just continue to reread—well, I am still rereading the Marvel one, because, you know... I'm glad that I found this story as well! I love the care and thought that you put into it. I really like when an author has fun with their writing. You also have a better understanding of character, character motives, and interactions than most other authors on this site. So, keep up the good work! And I'd like to offer this: if you ever need someone to spitball ideas with, feel free to PM me. I like to help out where I can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the interaction between Naruto and his mom plus Artemis in this chapter you’re done a great job at building their relationship throughout this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This and the ladt chapter is where I think your writing truly shines, in character interaction. Not to say you’re unable to do good action sequences but they don’t compare to when you put one or more characters together. On that note I’ll go back and review the chapter where olympus was reacting to Narutos fight, I think you didn’t do the best there gor reasons I’ll lay out in the review for that chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whats the point of being a powerful god if he can't save some people, well I guess we have to wait till next chapter to know what you have planned. hopefully it doesn't drag on for more that 2 chapter,and we can finally enter the main story. |