Reviews for The Anomaly
reptoholic chapter 11 . 5/22
! Awesome so far, keep up the great work. Hope he learns and makes more techniques.
reptoholic chapter 10 . 5/22
Loving it
reptoholic chapter 9 . 5/22
RyanMK666 chapter 10 . 5/15
Yoruichi is going to lose all the respect ichigo has for her if she continues togo through with this… i can honestly see ichigo never breaking, passing everything, then requesting to leave squad 2 becuase of her decisions and saying he can’t be on a squad lead by someone he can’t trust, shes playing a dangerous game that she will lose.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/3/2023
The fic is actually , i find Ichigo a bit too easily embarrassed by intimate situations, considering he's had quite a lot of experience with it. At least he doesn't get nosebleeds. Also, the Harem route may be prefferable here, seeing how there are so many interests. One night stands are generally tasteless, and the drama starting after that is even more so. In fact, there's been quite a bit too much drama, so some change of pace would be apreciated. I still haven't forgotten about Mamahana, and it would be nice to see MC with both her and Yoruichi. Aside from that, he's been quite nerfed so far, and incapable of doing much... he really needs to recover more of his strength. Aside from that, story is quite enjoyable.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/3/2023
The sex scene was half assed. Since the rating is M, either go all in and be explicit, or just don't do it at all. The ambiguity only makes the half assed attempt more annoying to read. And honestly, i couldn't care less about OC's that get it with MC. I was hoping for Yoruichi and Unohana to be honest.. and yet, i feel like there will be a rify with Yoruichi in the future. Unohana isn't even in the picture.. but if the r18 content will be that half assed and glossed over, it doesn't even matter if it happens or not.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/28/2023
There are too many female characters. it feel like writer doesn't know what content to add.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/27/2023
I will say though that you captured Gotei 13's bloody authoritarianism quite perfectly. Be it the Captains gruesomely putting down that rebellion without quarter and returning covered head to toe in gore, Central 46 and the nobles driving desperation in the Rukon through their foolish actions/inaction, Squad 2's utter ruthlessness, the nobles with their deadly infighting and Shinigami immediately turning on old non Shinigami acquaintances in a flash with lethal consequences to keep the status quo intact. It's a deadly treacherous world that makes living in the human world much more appealing.
shun04 chapter 6 . 10/26/2023
My character is cap kyoraku shunsui, i think he is with urahara and aizen one of the most dangerous swordmen.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/24/2023
This story is good in many areas but the negatives are glaring. Why would Ichigo join Squad 2 at all? He's a savior hero and would never become a ruthless weapon for a bunch of stuck up nobles. You'd think his treatment at the hands of the Quincy would've been an epiphany of 'never again on me or others' but nope he saw a green light without seemingly learning anything even with his trauma. That instructor lecturing him should've been the stop sign wake up call, especially about him murdering his own family for alleged treason and the instructor threating him and them if he hesitates with such an order. Hero Ichigo is dead, Ichigo the killer for insufferable aristocrats is here. Lets see him slaughter defenseless poor Rukon residents in unnecessarily gruesome ways that will make Yhwach proud, Kaein weep and everyone in his future turn their backs on him if they knew.
WirelessDown chapter 2 . 10/8/2023
Oh yeah. Let's add some fictional mental problems for Ichigo. Let's add to his story torture (it's strange that they didn't kill him, because he is the main threat to the Quincy plan), torment, and so on. As if his original story didn't have enough issues that could cause PTSD. After all, where is it possible without severe PTSD for the main character and creating an atmosphere of pity around him... a disgusting way to make the main character pathetic. I hope that your story will not come down to the banal pity of everyone and everything for Ichigo because of his PTSD and will not turn him into an incapacitated pathetic weakling who will kill the enemy and immediately reproach himself for what a bad person he is.
Binge Reader chapter 1 . 9/20/2023
This is the most irritating premise ever and I'm glad it's as stupid as any other stories with the same premise.
nexusplayer chapter 10 . 8/14/2023
XiiiKakashi chapter 11 . 8/7/2023
Great story!
kasicair chapter 1 . 7/21/2023
The initial premise is stupid. The author drops in his MC right in the middle of the captain meeting and then he nerfs him to hell. The only thing this initial premise is working is because the author forces the plot to make it work. With how trigger-happy the Central 46 is, Ichigo would have been a prisoner sooner rather than later.

I am sure there will be people liking the story. There always are. But I don't think this start makes for a very appealing story premise. Nobody likes MC to get nerfed to hell right off the bat just to facilitate the plot.

Then the idiot strawberry asks Unohana to 'keep a secret from other captains'. What an idiot! She is a Captain and from her perspective, she knows him for a few minutes. He is practically a stranger to her. Why would she keep any kind of secret from her comrades for the sake of some stranger? It's stupid.

The MC is basically Ichigo. Still a stupid idiot kid. One would think that as 22 yo, he would be a bit wiser than when he was 15 but apparently that's no-go in this story.

Like... I know everything will work out in MC's favor. But I also know that it really should not. Not with the way Soul Society is in that period of time.

The only reason why this works is the author forcing it.
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