Reviews for On the Other Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying this new story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two updates in such s short period of time! You're starting to spoil your readers :) But seriously, this is amazingly written, and I agree with other posters that your Snape is magnificent. The assault was hard to read - that's not a criticism, but a tribute to your writing ability. I know it was put on for show (and Bellatrix was great here, by the way) but I still felt Alice's fear, and, man, that defeated sob - that hit in the gut. And I love that you've given us a strong heroine who is still human enough to be terrified - because that's how real life is. Oh, and Quinoa the cat. Was there ever a better name for an animal? Thanks for that balm to soothe at the end. Looking forward to more. Cheers, QB |
![]() ![]() “Hopefully this story will keep you entertained for the time being”? Girl, I don’t feel entertained I feel obsessed with two stories (and loving it). It’s an absurd how well you write. Normally, I’m not a fan of OC, but still, yours are so natural and interesting that Alice already got me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delicious beginning! And by "delicious", I mean terrifying, well-written, and full of promise. I'm so glad you're still writing (and so glad you're still working on The Stirring!) Poor Alice. And I shudder to think what that curse does. So much unanswered right now - and all because she needed a thimble-ful of dirt! Alas. Can't wait to see where this goes. Cheers, -QB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah I like this female lead. I feel like this is going to super fun. Also I’m amazed how you keep Snape so on character. Congratulations on staring a new story. Can’t wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the first chapter, update when you can! :) |