I really like this book, innocent first love and exploring, really, really sweet

Wonderful! About chapter 14 I was worried this story would leave me hanging without a good ending.
SO Glad I was wrong.
How Voldie was killed is not unique, but Hermione as part Veela!? Wow... I Love It!
Epilogue is awesome as well. Just enough detail to make things feel good and closed.
Thanks Ever So Much!

Didn't need the word "better".

thank you for sharing this fantastic story as well as for all the time and effort put into it

Thanks for writing this story, i liked the idea that the dursleys got rid of him.
The only deficit i see.
The years where over as if it was only a few weeks. A Story is no 100m run, but like a hike for a few days.

The last Chapter was mor of a summary, that alone would have deserved to take 2-3 Chapters.

Thanks and take care.

Ok the 12yr having had sex multiple times was already weird, but one of them being 20? Thats hella fucked up

I'm enjoying the story so far. However I think you might have a continuity error. The next to last paragraph of this chapter, refers to the diary horcrux as still being missing. After Sharpclaw, had interviewed Dobby, and been shown the diary in chapter 21. Confirming the existence of multiple horcrux's, and starting the Goblins on their own horcrux hunt.
Is that true, or did I miss a cue to one of those scenes being a flashback?

Thanks for a fine story.

A damn good story.

Only complaint is that it was light on details and the like.

Some time in the Days to come, whenever that might be, go back and fill in the details.

Will be watching.

This story really deserved a couple more chapters with slice of life. I think you thend to End storys to quick and usually rush it in the end. But still thank you for a lovely story!

Love this story! I get this very nice feeling while reading it, Thank you very much!

Thank you for another great story

Thank you for sharing the story. Just a comment I think you overdid the welcome that Harry and Hermione in France frankly, considering his past experiences in Britain I don’t think any young man myself included. That age would’ve returned to Hogwarts.

Nothing has been said about quiddtch, practices or games. They usually have one game before winter hits, and two in the spring, no? Is Harry even ON the team?

The book is already turned over to Sharptooth, by Dobby, no? Last chapter? Or do they not know that's whose book it was, bcuz Harry stabbed it?

I don't know about a "blessing", but it's pretty effing cool!