Reviews for My Angel
Hailey chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Worst Chapter ever,in my opinion.

Number One: The story was way to choppy

Number Two: Who the heck is the main chacter?It changed back and forth.

Number Three: When you stated "It was vain." Thats not what vain means.

Number Four: The chacters didn't say anything with feelong.

Number Five: It was boring.

Number Six: If your main chacter is a grown man who is teacher (which im not sure of *see #2) then use proper grammer not dialect. Do not use words like "Chillin'" and "Cuz" ect.

I wont be reading anymore of stories.
HourglassGluedToTheTable chapter 4 . 10/30/2009
Hello,

Wow... this is really good! :) It was very good :)

Great work

Rhr4eva
HourglassGluedToTheTable chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
Hello,

Yay! :)

Great work

Rhr4eva
HourglassGluedToTheTable chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Hello,

Oh wow... :(

Great work

Rhr4eva
black gargie lazy to login chapter 4 . 11/12/2003
Wa! So touching! I just love this fic! I didn't know you have a passion for Pay It Forward! I've watched the show 4 times and I always cry at the end of the movie! I just love the movie! Great fic, especially the ending. Keep it up!
cory chapter 4 . 7/2/2003
huh?