Enjoy this.

Alright, that bit with Annalise caught me off-guard. Though I can't remember who might be the second one...?

Alright, that bit with Annalise caught me off-guard. Though I can't remember who might be the second one...?

Haha, even Radahn inspires a bit of concern from the Good Hunter

Pretty damn good, only major gripe is the name... but that's likely just cause I kept thinking of the guy as a spacecraft

like it

Very interesting, I look forward to continuing.

Thank you for your hard work! The story dragged me in from the moment I read exactly how the hunter got into the new world. This is the first time I've seen such an unusual use of the power of the great ones. It was funny to read about the reaction of opponents to his aggressive fighting style and choice of weapons. Although I noticed that most likely this is partly due to the bloody god of this world. The reputation of his followers is rather doubtful, which he noticed in his own way when he smelled the smell of rotten and old blood from a stranger at the exit of the dungeon. I like how your characters are constantly having conversations with each other and you can say that to some extent they are teasing in a friendly way. Although so far it's going one way. I also see your favorite, but Rennie the witch is an ambiguous character from my point of view. A lot of effort was invested in her in the game and I, like many others, sympathized with her. But in the end, the stories of her followers and rather aggressive actions against other demigods and the Great Will makes me think that she is quite straightforward in throwing away what cannot be useful to her in her struggle. In addition, in another work on this universe, it was mentioned that after leaving this world, she does not so much liberate it, as she concedes it to other gods. After all, even though the power of the main usurper has weakened, there are still many small ones. And they didn't go away after her ascension. In any case, I will patiently wait for further chapters. Take as much time as you need. I hope the quality of work will continue to remain at the same height. You have put a lot of interesting nuances into the plot, and I am already bubbling with interest in what will happen in the next chapters. There are many more interesting interactions waiting for us. In the meantime, see you in the next chapter.

This story has so much potential! I can’t wait for more! Both Audrey and Orion seem to be dynamic characters with a lot of personality to them. I’m excited to see more interactions between Orion and Ranni as well. There connection to the moon is one that’s quite interesting. Update soon and great work so far!

Pls bring more chapters on this and dragon’s den

I’m enjoying this mini Elden ring series a lot but I hope you bring back Welcome to the dragon den

This is fucking amazing more please

Nice

I’m absolutely loving this story so far. I look forward to a continuation eagerly. As it is, you said yourself that the good hunter would lose to both malenia and radahn. This means he is, in his current state, weak enough to die to a great many enemies in elden ring- though none in the beginning areas. How do you intend, if at all, in strengthening him? His absorption of runes is a portent of just that, but if I may reduce myself to begging- make him a wizard? Pleeeeaaassseeee. Far too often I see magic altogether passed over in these sorts of works entirely for more visceral bladed combat. But magic is cool too! It deserves a moment in the spotlight- though, don’t take this as me saying you MUST do this. It’s your story after all. I just feel that far too often it is overlooked as a source of power. Magic is cool, darn it! In any case, I applaud you for both your skill in writing and characterization, as well as your ability with fight scenes. The fight scenes themselves seem a bit rough at times, but that could have more to do with my current sleep deprived nature than anything else. Also- I believe actually killing anything outside of constructs is impossible in-game. At least, permanently. The rune of destined death was removed from the elden ring, and with it, the land and its inhabitants were rendered deathless- including the tarnished. The only thing that can be done is to temporarily kill them, and strip them of their runes- runes they perhaps passively absorb from the environment to return to some semblance of life. The interpretation is up to you of course. I just believe this would be an interesting aspect to introduce to the story- as the Good Hunter obviously had to undergo a similar process of endless death and rebirth to achieve his goals. In any case, thank you for writing this truly wonderful piece of literature. I look forward to more from you in the future.

Now that I think about it the good hunter could be considered a god born of blood. Oh I can just see the moment when he meets the formless mother and they both just stare at each other ( assuming that the good hunter can still see elderrich beings and all with his mortal body ) till she sets a small part of his blood on fire just to say one thing. " Son? " (que hunter confusion ) "Im sorry. what?" comedy gold