Reviews for A Song of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, but feels too short. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Jaime Lannister can cut through plate and chain like butter with a normal sword, then Valyrian Steel is a freaking light saber lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, was hoping for more Naruto action! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always a pleasure to read an awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite nice with how this was done here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, always wanted to read about useless naruto with no chakra in a crossover fic. Said absolutely no one ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah i dont like this story or reasoning, you shouldve just made your own charcater if you dont want to have Narutos personality or any of his abilities. Fics with a third of the word count have many more reviews because every actually intelligent person can tell this is a dumb story idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when is the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, you've done goofed by taking Ninja Jesus at his Peak and depowering him. It was a disastrous decision. Want to have a magic character? Then use a magic character. He literally has an internal reactor which makes chakra, which you know fuels his fucking powers. No comparison to ASOIAF shitty sacrifice-based system. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first time I want an Other's POV, just so I can hear their thoughts when they have to face Kurama and go "That's bullshit". (I assume that if magic is ever strong enough for the Others to make a move, it's enough for Kurama to appear in a hilarious stomp). Also lol at Bloodraven speaking of true might at Naruto, a person that has wielded more might than this entire planet. I find the irony of canon largest threat (the Others) being the least problematic for Naruto delightful. |
![]() ![]() Assuming Naruto eventually gets a castle and land for himself, he will need soldiers of his own. I could see Dorien being one of those men, maybe a couple of the other survivors of the attack. They should have some time now, it will take time before Tywin realizes that the men he sent have been gone for too long and send for reinforcements, by that time, they will be long gone from the area. This also means Tywin is in a difficult situation, while surrendering Kings Landing would be more than enough to keep war from breaking out again, Tywins chances of getting his daughter married to Robert are not as good now. Based on canon, its clear that by taking kings landing, that would have been enough to get in Roberts good graces, the only reason he had for killing the targaryens was to earn points with the new king, and hopefully get his daughter married to him. Now that the targaryens are out of his grasp, it leaves Tywin in a difficult situation. As far as I am concerned it could not happen to a nicer guy, however I am concerned that he will be taking an interest in naruto after this. Also I take it naruto has taken the first steps to molding fire chakra, thanks to the dagger he welds. Also based on an earlier chapter, I can see where detecting water i dorne would be useful, however can he detect minerals and such as well like was hinted? Because if so, I am curious on how he would do it, I thought he could only detect water, not metal. |
![]() ![]() Che men no es hora de que madure naruto ya q cuando crece en boruto es mas maduro,o en la película donde se casa cn hinata.. Y ademas el cn ashara no deberian ser dueño las tierras y casa dayne ,ya q se padre muere de una enfermedad y su hermano muere por un accidente de caballo..y solo queda ella y su hermana como cabeza ,ya q en dorne gobiernan hombres o mujeres... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The bonding between Naruto and Elia was a lovely touch. It's always fun to watch someone react with bafflement to a little bit of kindness, but that's the world they live in. |