Reviews for A Song of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I quite like the nerf, it’s enough to give the story tension without taking away Narutos power entirely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Q paso de valkirya a esto ? No lo digo de mal pero quiero saber que paso |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story I won't lie, even though I personally believe Naruto's relationship with Ashara was a bit rushed, hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jaehaerys II was a weak king, no one in Westeros really liked him tbh, the guy ruined a political marriage to marry his wife, an incest marriage that had not been done since Aegon IV and his wife Naerys, while Aelor and Aelora were promised to each other, we all know they died before consuming it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok let's put it this way, Naruto is so fucking delusional, also not having a lot of chakra still lets Naruto use basic techniques such as substitution and body flickering which are as basic as it gets, he could genuinely kill every Kingsguard in a matter of seconds |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is Naruto taking orders from Rhaegar LMFAO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funnily enough, Naruto with much less chakra would be a god at Sage Mode lol one of the biggest issues he had with Sage Mode and learning how to control it was his massive chakra pool |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to be able to express in English, without any external help, everything I've felt so far about this fic, but since I can't, I'll just say it... I've just read everything you've written of this fic in 3 days, obviously staying up late those three days, but I have everything much clearer now and I can say that this fic is written with a lot of love and great attention to detail. If it weren't a fic, I could tell you without a doubt that much of what I've read could perfectly fit in some books I've read, really good books (in my opinion), and that attribute to you a tremendous merit for the palpable effort I've come to feel while reading. I sincerely hope you continue with the fic, take as long as you need, that if you have more ideas you don't hesitate to express them because your style is great and is not very far from the more formal writing I've come to read. I wouldn't put you at the level of a book like one of The Wheel of Time, but without a doubt your style is at least at the level of the writing of the first book of the Red Rising saga, and that is undoubtedly impressive. I wish you all the best and hope to see more chapters of this fic soon, until then I will wait eagerly... Bye ;) PD:I wanted to leave this comment on the last chapter but I already commented there and it wouldn't let me, so F. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great! Can't wait to read more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Impressive , hopefully it updates soon . |
![]() ![]() ![]() This man reaped a bloody toll. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Butcher |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell hit this guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You gone pay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This guy Rhaegar tweaked out . Yall aint cool like that bro lol. |