Reviews for A Song of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don’t use naruto in your story if your just going to nerf him |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the premise and the idea of adaptable, and growth.. just a lil worried about progress, hope you don't drop the fic, I'm starting to really like it ! have a good time, waiting for more, kudos |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love me some Naruto crossover to a realistic fandom.. thank you so much, this shows a lot of potential. Hope the second chapter isn't any worse |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree on the restrictions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() torn about the nerf, on one hand the nerf is necessary or he will be one shooting everything, on the other the nerf really hit hard, but I do look forward to seeing what can you do with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I get nerfing his chakra that's fine, but why the fuck are you nerfing him physically? I mean it's not as if dragons and fucking ice monsters exist in this world right? RIGHT? So why not have him be the (physically) strongest human in the world? That could have at least made this story bearable. And if the argument is 'his strength comes from his chakra' well that shit was clearly proven to be wrong during the final Naruto v Sasuke fight where Naruto, who just had almost all of his energy absorbed on top of having just fought for 3 full days non-stop, sends Sasuke flying, with a single punch, over 40 feet into a mountain, into a 3 foot deep crater. Seriously, if you want to write about a weak as fuck character in asoiaf, why choose Naruto just to then nerf him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I saw the title of this story and where you ended with Naruto, namely the fourth shinobi war, I had high hopes. Sadly, this story just ends up like any other stories, namely the fucking nerfing of Naruto. I seriously want to ask, why take Naruto or Harry Potter and nerf them to hell than writing a story that is just an OC if you want to write one so badly. You think, oh, hey there is another flamer that only can say hate things. But here is the difference. We can take for example Superman. A humanoid alien from the planet Krypton who is practical god-like. He can fly, he is invunerable. There is even ice-breath and superspeed and then superstrength. How do you think that he is fighting against his villains, who all and mostly have just a normal human body. The only nerf he gained was the kryptonite and Magic, so imagine that Superman fights against people that has no kryptonite. The Man of steel mostly fight at possible 5% of his total strength. Any actions he do, Superman learned to keep his strength back, a lot. So why are there writers like you and others that immediately throw in the nerf towel when you can take the other way with Naruto keeping his strength back. Perhaps you are a athlete runner and you run against a friend that isn't an athlete and you keep in your speed to run at the same speed as your friend. Do you see my point? Why there is no need of reason just to take away chakra or nerf them to kingdom come. I only left this review, but your decision of taking away chakra just killed all my interest in this. Good luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah this is really fucking boring. If you want to write a story about a NORMAL person in asoiaf, maybe don't pick a fucking superhuman then. Oh, but if you do that then you can't trick people into reading this dogshit cause no one wants to read about a character they like getting nerfed to hell and back for 'DRAMA'. The only way you MIGHT have been able to make this interesting is by 1) not having Naruto appear in a location where no named characters that people actually give a fuck about appears and 2) having Naruto focus on his physical abilities rather than his essentially worthless 'magic'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not particularly a fan of nerfed characters for the sake of drama. But at least this way if Naruto gets his ass handed to him I can rationalise it as an excuse that he's just a normal human. Not like that other got fic where full power eos Naruto was held back by base human Jaime Lannister. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To the guest who can’t even sign in and needs anonymity criticizing a point in the story isn’t being a “ fuck boy “ or a “ fan boy “ , To the author there are better ways to go about it you could’ve rewritten ‘got’ world where Naruto was born into it and bound by its rules or taken a younger version of naruto and have him grow and adapt to the new world ( like the first guy said ) instead of taking one of the stronger versions then immediately nerfing it to high heaven Which makes it pointless to use said version |
![]() ![]() Awesome. Loved it. Loved the realism. Don't listen to what fanboy fuck boy's of old 'Ruto are saying. Write the story like you want to. Having little chakra seems like an awesome challenge. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() So a nerfed to shit Naruto is gonna have to deal with dragons , white walkers , the mountain |
![]() ![]() Why not just use an earlier Naruto? Instead if nerfing him? |