Reviews for Reading HP - 1
Guest chapter 15 . 4/21
'Strange, 'though, that 'Quirrellmort' needed to get Hagrid drunk and bribe him with a dragon egg... when he could have just used Legilimency to extract that knowledge (or just read-up about Cerberi in Hogwart's library); Hagrid's no mental giant (no pun intended) and would have had no training in Occlumency to keep the information concealed...
Guest chapter 4 . 4/14
Good story, but I know that you stole portions of it, if not the whole thing, from another author named 0Aratay0. It is one thing to add your own spin to it, which I can tell you did, but I recognize most of the lines. I can tell you are a talented author, and I find it such a waste to copy other people's works.
Esly chapter 19 . 3/25
Me encantó mucho :-)
bookivore chapter 19 . 3/20
I like to see how authors think characters will react to Harry’s story but it does take a lot of time to go through all the readings so clipped reading, short reactions during the readings, and other scenes of discussion and interplay works really well. The overall plot just teased at this point, Minerva using Harry’s money to buy him a broom was a huge overstep in a different way than her other issues, basically I think the only person who could use a child’s money would have to have the excuse that they were his guardian. She could more easily excuse using donations meant for the Gryffindor quidditch team.
Mando-Vet chapter 7 . 3/16
Decided to reread this, and glad I did. It still holds up
s.roest02 chapter 5 . 3/12
please use the idea that Lily was a member of a squibbed out branch of the Slytherin line.
and make the line be a more direct line than Tommy boy has...
ro781727 chapter 2 . 2/5
James’ grandfather was HENRY Potter (not Dudley)!
vcullenv chapter 6 . 1/31
You have no idea how much this story means to me
Guest chapter 12 . 1/22
It just occurred to me, a beautifully fitting punishment for Dumbledore. Given how much he seems to enjoy his little Machiavellian games, and what Harry has suffered as a direct result of his machinations, I suggest the Umbridge treatment.
4 hours a night, 5 nights a week for an entire semester, writing lines.
With a Blood Quill.
"I must not play games with people's lives, especially not children."
VANESSA chapter 19 . 1/18
I hope you know i love this kind of histories, thank you so much
wandamarie chapter 19 . 12/11/2023
thank you for your time your talent on the story
wandamarie chapter 18 . 12/11/2023
thank you for the story
wandamarie chapter 17 . 12/11/2023
thank you for your time and you talent on the story
wandamarie chapter 16 . 12/11/2023
thank you for your time and talent on the story so far
wandamarie chapter 15 . 12/11/2023
thank you
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