This was absolutely beautiful. Everything about this story had me loving it and wanting to read more!

I loved this entire saga except for one. It makes no sense to me to punish someone for a crime they may commit in the future. Better to try and change their beliefs then if you fail kill them.

What does Harry mean Slytherin students have been consistent in their feelings towards him and hever never gone with the flow ?
Malfoy tried to befriend Harry the first time they met and only start antagonized him when he was rebuked, to claim that slytherin students have always been honest with their feelings for him is a lie. So is the claim that they never went with the flow, they were perfectly okay with it when it was convenient for them to do it like during Harry's second and fourth year where they had no problem jumping into the Harry's hating bandwagon.
What Harry is saying makes absolutely no sense.

Rough at points. Great layout- great ideas as well. Could have gone more in depth with some topics, such as memories of working with the secret order I can't spell lol. But overall, great, a couple follow up chapters would be great, would daphy remember? Or get a few adventures of her own? How would things progress with muggles and magical Britain? Any ideas for a short series? I liked it, constantly kept interest, all in all a good story, though, I wished it had been longer- but really great job!

Last couple chapters were a bit odd, but it is over. The extra villain and his foes gave the story a "Mummy" (the Brendan Frazier movie) twist that was hard to avoid picturing, lol
Thanks for writing.

D mn. It's a rare story that can bring tears to my eyes. This one has.

while i never read the original. This is an amazing story filled with ups and downs and emotions all over the place. An absolute wonderful story that i didnt want to put down so i could find out what happens next

A well written story. Thank you for taking the time to update the original.

Thanks for an outstanding read. Clearly, editing and restoring this story was a labor of love, and it well paid out. Definitely hitting my faves list!

I'm cool with harry being in slytherin and powerful. Also with him being at ends with all the old gang. But for the love of God, why can't writers give the antagonistic bashed character any real nuance or depth? These versions of hermione, ron and other are cheap parlor tricks that only amplify a certain aspect of how those characters are. That's the one thing that bugs me about these kind of stories. The bashed characters have a constant flat way of acting & responding to the world around them. It's cheap and It's frustrating. Especially when a story has something in it that does seem to have some "flavor" to it. Idk if I can finish this and I truly want to. Maybe another day and time but it is really irritating right now.

Fuck you, killing harry was horrible

Really great story.
Even with some really shitty cliches like magical cores and super runes, it was really great.
Up until the last 3 chapters.
Harry dies.
Or more accurately, the Harry we have been reading ALL story long, dies, and some new faggot takes his place.
After that alot of dumb bullshit happens but it's just retarded written by a retarded author who killed their story.
Just sad it was a great story but it's like the last 3 chapters were taken over by a retard who just decided to fuck up everything that was written before because "fuck it , why not?".

I love the story and I love your writing.
I tried reading a bit of the original, but I didn't like it.
Your story was way easier to read, had flow and set the scenes properly. Thank you for putting in the effort and making a good storyline into a story that is easy and Entertaining to read.

Excellently edited Zaterra02's fanfic. No mistakes and you read it very smoothly. Story is ok too. I'm very happy it has an ending.

This one of the best fanfics I have read. From start to end, this fic is amazing. Thanks for making this rewrite.