Very edgy and so cringe, I have second hand embarassement just by reading this story...

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Holy plot twists, Batman! I’m just mind blown. I was flabbergasted with the murder suicide, but now I’m just mind whammied.

He didn’t kill Scylla did he? I liked her.

Now Harry has to deal with Granger and the rest of the Weasley's.

This is so amazing thank you for this!

Great work!
This is also one of my all time favourites.
Good to see someone willing to improve upon it even more!

I remember reading the original and barely being able to finish so thank you

For an old dark lord Potter sure acts like an angst filled teenager, and for a supposedly cunning Slytherin he allows his enemies far too many chances; if not for a Christmas gift he could have lost his obsession and have to go back in time all over again.

I will freely admit that I never read the original because I couldn’t get very far with all the errors and I didn’t care enough to edit it to make it legible. I did that a couple times for people because they whined about not having a beta. After the hateful comments I got from the authors, I understood why they had no luck with betas. You’re a good person for taking this on and it’s great to read.

I know this is a repost, but this is such an badly written story full of terrible cliches.

Such a good read, I haven’t read the original and am happy to be on this road of revision you’re taking us through!
Thanks for the hard work involved!

Thank you for doing this! I am sure the original author would be happy that someone helped with this!

Love it so good