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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great chapter:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() One day you will surpass Satoru , Goat Shiki. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Хжадыжал Юта превратился в принцессу запертую в замке которую похитил дракон ,а Рика стала принцем спасающим принцессу ) хотя ..? Или это Шики принц ,а Рика это белый конь Шики..? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the Story as always. Though there is one thing I want to note. The story in general has amazing writing and I love the dynamic you created, but ur prose tends, a times, to be a bit much. There is a lot of inner monologue every chapter, that feels redundant or simply overbearing. Like this chapter had at least 3 longer parts, where Shiki comments on the connection between Rika and Yuta, with nothing new added. That was especially notably during chapters, focusing on clan politics. every chapter, a lot of details are repeated, we alrdy heard a lot of times, or which are quite simply obvious to the reader, and really dont need to be explained. It does slow the pace a lot imo. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really great as always. And also remember to take care of your health and I hope you are well now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sense Shiki receiving an official ranking as a Special Grade sorcerer coming up around the corner! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome Back Great Shiki |
![]() ![]() ![]() You scared me lol, joined your discord to see if all was okay. Wish you a speedy recovery, and thank you a lot for this story. It's seriously amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great wonderful chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Что то случилось или автор взял перерыв ?..или это у меня проблемы и мне не видно обновления ..? Или ФФ заморозили ..(・_・;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope we see a POV of Maki soon, even though it's not the first time they meet I'm excited to know that more characters from the main cast are about to appear. |