Reviews for The Gestaltation of Severus Snape
Foxlight6956 chapter 22 . 5/28
Very interesting chapter. Makes me wonder if Voldemort will make prosthetics for the students who'd join his ranks like he did for Pettigrew in the original timeline (iirc).
smeleanor chapter 7 . 5/24
Jaoheah chapter 18 . 5/19
9 is missing the best to use 3/4 instead. I don't think this site likes characters like
excessivelyperky chapter 26 . 5/18
I am extremely surprised that Dumbledore is being this helpful letting Severus and Lily stay together like this. I would think he'd put her in an Order safe house with a bunch of other Gryffindors to make sure she kept up with the party line.

Given that Dumbledore forced Snape to STFU after almost being eaten by a werewolf it'd be nice to find out why and how Albus changed. Given how he treated Snape in canon, like the dirty Slytherin most Gryffindors think him, it's nice that he did change.

My goodness, Dumbledore apologized? Faints.

It's nice that Lily and Severus will have a chance to be together. Even with others at the place, they are all about the same age and I suspect a certain amount of privacy will be worked out.
xXMoonlitSorrowsXx chapter 26 . 5/18
I’m sure I’ve mentioned this before but I gotta say it again… I LOVE this story! This is a well written AU. I’m looking forward to Act 3!
kukuhimanpr chapter 26 . 5/18
i imagine the severuses are doing mental cartwheels and backflips victory dances after lily forgives them.
cookeroach chapter 26 . 5/18
Short but sweet. This is a perfect place to pause, though I wish you had another ten chapters ready to go :p

Forgiveness and friendship. Both were needed by Lily and Severus desperately, and I love how it was portrayed so organically. See you in a few months!
tatsuyaShiiba chapter 26 . 5/18
The story was a great read, I can't wait for the next act! I love how well you've captured the dynamics between Severus and Lily, and Dumbledore's advice was an eye opener.
Great work.
Dark Angelx1992 chapter 26 . 5/18
I'm just having such a "Now what?" moment (insert Nemo meme here), I'm already eagerly waiting for the next act.

I loved the talk between Dumbledore and Lily, Severus needs unconditional love and from Dumbledore he needed to be seen as an equal instead of a puppet that is kept in the dark until needed. It is kind of sad that Mary and Marlene know Snape better than his supposed best friend but Lily's memories of little Sev are preventing her form seeing the young man that Severus is now. Severus isn't the little kid from Cokeworth anymore, but neither is Lily. What is important is that despite growing up, they have to prevent each other from growing apart.

I'm excited for the summer at Spinner's end, how Regulus will fare as a spy and what will happen to the Marauders. I also haven't forgotten about Snape's old wand, will he retrieve it from Ollivander?

Riddle trying to turn the basilisk into a horcrux is quite the frightening thought, Nagini seems like a kitten in comparison. Then again, a basilisk is easily taken care of as long as a rooster is around.

I wanted to ask, as Severus is studying Alchemy and Lily seems to be joining him, will Dumbledore introduce them to his friend Nicholas Flamel?
And there is something I still don't get, Nagini's bite marks have properly transferred to Severus' younger body and are noticed by everyone, but the dark mark is only a hallucination, what exactly is the difference?

Thank you for sharing this great story, it is definitely my current favorite Snily fic. I love that you're not rushing things with the two and that Lily is portrayed with her own faults. Hope to see an update from you soon until then, may life treat you well.
cookeroach chapter 25 . 5/17
I like how Remus and Marlene have been forced to think about their choice of friends. That they know they can't be friends with Severus and respect that shows a great deal of restraint on your part. Too many writers take the "quick and easy" way out and end up harming organic character development.
excessivelyperky chapter 25 . 5/17
What a clever way to give Gryffindor five or six times as many points as Slytherin got! I knew Dumbledore would be up to the challenge. I'm just surprised he didn't find a way to punish Snape somehow. But I feel that he'll find a way.

It is fun to watch Remus finally grow a spine. Now, will he keep it that way or will he give in to pack pressure?

And Regulus is going to be the spy in the well this time around, poor sod. Albus is good at this.

At least Snape got the real memory from Sluggy about the Horcruxes.
excessivelyperky chapter 24 . 5/17
Yeah, Tom's totally right about Lily slamming Snape and gushing over James all by herself.

And as we all know, Snape saved the school so of course he'll end up being punished. Again. That's what he's there for, right? I'm sure McGonagall can figure out how to take a hundred points from Slytherin and give them to Gryffindor for nobly being rescued.

Yay for Fawkes, though! I'm very surprised he showed up-I honestly thought Dumbledore's pet would only care for Gryffindors.
kukuhimanpr chapter 25 . 5/17
harry be having so much trouble getting slughorn's memory, and then severus just said 'hold my potions'.
COULDNT12761022 chapter 25 . 5/17
I like the difference between Snape and Harry getting the memories with Snape being very confrontational
tatsuyaShiiba chapter 25 . 5/17
This chapter feels a bit rushed, compared to the rest of the story. Both Regulus/Dumbledore and Severus/Horace conversation is not what I expected at all, the shift is too sudden. Or maybe I don't understand their characters as much as I thought. But again, it was never really explained why Regulus switched sides in the end, although he was a marked death eater, so maybe he did care that much for his servant to warrant such anger.
I like Mary / Severus's friendship, and I'm looking forward to how you're gonna write Lily's redemption act lol.
Great work, as always, keep it up!
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