Reviews for A Wizard, A Dwarf and An Elf Meet In The Woods
aaronmag chapter 12 . 8/26/2022
It was totally unexpected for Corinna to be here. And to be so friendly and welcoming as well…

But then there are the dead bodies and also her last statement….

So I have a feeling the stuff is about to go down!

And by stuff I really mean s—-…

aaronmag chapter 11 . 8/20/2022
That little reveal about fair Corinna was great. I am both curious and creeped out!
penny4him chapter 10 . 8/9/2022
Cool overview of their gear in this chapter. Poor Stefane is just so easy to tease! ;) And Garlt continues to be blunt, of course! I didn't know Daelynn could cast a darkvision spell on others. Very useful. I imagine we'll get to see them putting this interesting gear to use. Looking forward to reading more.
aaronmag chapter 10 . 8/8/2022
Yes, you got me chuckling. I loved the 'demi-human' joke. :)

Poor Stefane. He gets no respect. He is only dressing in original D&D appropriate wizard wear. Many of them wore dark blue robes with all sorts of symbols on them. :)
penny4him chapter 9 . 8/3/2022
Ooh, creepy-cool rose in this chapter! I snickered at how Daelynn and Garlt kept hauling Stefane back from danger. The traps were a nice touch. And Daelynn getting ready for the spider-climb spell—"If ye were hungry lass, I have some biscuits ye're welcome to." LOL.
penny4him chapter 8 . 8/3/2022
Hmm, interesting to learn about Stefane's instinctual magical abilities! And that they now know where to start looking for the Tome. The sparring/combat training was fun too! Daelynn's pretty cool.
aaronmag chapter 9 . 8/2/2022
I laughed every time Strephane tried to cast a spell. :)

I liked the way they went through the options and description of Spider-climb.
aaronmag chapter 8 . 8/2/2022
I think you mean ‘Mystra’ but put Mystara

I liked both the sparring and the language. Also liked the discussion

I am curious as to why Stefane is sa indifferent to a naked elf flaunting herself in front of him. I have a feeling it has more than just devotion to Corinna. Is he under some sort of charm? Hmmm…
penny4him chapter 7 . 7/20/2022
Ah, the bluntness of a dwarf. Gritty enough. ;)
Daelynn is so cool and collected. And her throwing star comment! I wonder if she was serious. Stefane seems the most relatable so far. I kinda feel sorry for him having to put up with Garlt's comments!
Interested to see where this goes!
aaronmag chapter 7 . 7/20/2022
Hmmm Daelynn removing her badge of office. I think she has a purpose to that. Could this 'new tax' not be legit and she is getting a lay of the land?

Heh heh, Stefane willing to fight for the honor of his lady Corinna in a whole much ado about nothing..., I remember being that dumb once.

Aha! I was right! The Baron is applying all sorts of 'new taxes' that are unknown about with the King.

Stefane, Stefane, Stefane...getting all tongue tied. It was adorable. :)

Pleasures shared equally...definitely would want Daelynn to define that, ha ha.

But then she puts in a stipulation about carnal liasons

I enjoyed the articles.

I like Gemfinder by the way. So I don't think he is a jerk. Just blunt. I like how he has rage strength he can call on as well.
penny4him chapter 6 . 7/10/2022
I see why this is rated M. Nice job showcasing their fighting abilities. Stefane has some cool stuff going on. And the cliffhanger ending to the chapter ... gotta know that name!
penny4him chapter 5 . 7/10/2022
LOL. Now that, she thought to herself, was a really nice ... time to stumble over a clump of grass. ;) Nicely done.
penny4him chapter 4 . 7/10/2022
This story just keeps getting better and better! And aaaahhh, I did not expect who the herald was! :D So excited to have another [character name redacted to avoid spoilers] story!
aaronmag chapter 6 . 7/10/2022
"Grab it like..."

Oh man, ha ha, too funny.

The drawing in the book...

This is entertaining too! You are on a roll.

"But my Master would not send me on a fool's errand..."

Unless, Stefane, unless it was a good way to get rid of an unwanted suitor. ;)

Chuckling, Daelynn returned to her repairs.

Okay, Daelynn, I'll buy the spirit one. But the succubus one? You already have shown yourself not above fibs. Already had the passing thought that Stefane was built like a god. So my suspicion is you are just being a bit of a tease... ;)

Brotherhood of the Road they know they are messing with a Herald? I don't think that is a very good idea...

Binding vines...

Okay then. These guys are more powerful than I thought...

"You are making a grave error, sir..."

Yeah, that is what I thought!

Another Herald

Oh snap! You boys did not just say didn't just admit to waylaying one of her compatriots, did you? the vines snapped.

Whoa! Did he just go dwarf-hulk?

Almost equal.

You are going to bring in the horse too! This is great! :)

It was a name she knew.

Ooohh...damn fine ending hook. This chapter was really good! Loved it. Even before the action it was flowing at a fine pace. The longest one yet, right?
aaronmag chapter 5 . 7/4/2022
'in lieu off [of] payment

In one place you 'Sliver Tree' rather than 'Silver Tree'

'she could wonder [wander] off'

Last line 'Focussing' - Focusing

Very surprised at the end where Stefane is built like a demi-god. Of course this has me wondering if he will turn out to be more than he seems and if he has been playing Daelynn a bit with his 'wizard apprentice' bit.

Either way, intriguing. :)
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