I'm trying to get myself to like this, but I am still confused with Naruto's cursed technique. Everybody's explanation and it being the reverse of the 6 eyes made me so damn confused.

Why pair Riko with Gojo? She acts like Kurama is to Naruto, like a protector, so I think it would be better to pair her with Naruto.

Would Shirou Emiya incantation help Mai CT to take inspiration from it to create her own since they both deal with the construction of weapons. Also really enjoy the direction, but will you add Naruto enemies later? Till next time Author, Godspeed.

Story’s been absolutely perfect and I can’t wait to see where you take it.

I really think it would be better to rewrite the story and not have anyone else from the Naruto-verse besides Naruto himself, as its awkward whenever they appear/are brought up (I think this is mainly due to the two worlds not being merged well enough, as well as the fact it makes no sense for them to appear in this universe when it was only Naruto that was reincarnated).

A big thing, you need to focus More on actual descriptions on what is going on particularly whenever there is dialogue as whenever anyone speaks a lot is being said but not enough is being told if you get what I mean, there is a lot of nameless chatter or conversations that just Keep Going On because we have to Know Exactly what was trying to be said even though we could of inferred it paragraphs ago.

Also more time should be spent on Naruto himself and who he actually is, we know he is meant to be some version of a reincarnated Naruto but we haven't actually seen anything that shows it, there was a mention of natural energy not working the same But the real thing we NEED to see is just how a matured experienced Naruto would act when in 'this situation' - you get what I mean there right?

Love the story it’s absolutely amazing and I can’t wait to see where you take it

this story is so frickin amazing , keep it up! looking forward to more chapters soon

This story had me until this chapter. I liked a lot of the things in this fic. The English was readable. The set-up was believable. The characters spoke and acted like real people. Unfortunately, the constant mental gymnastics for the power and the restriction put on it for nothing other than plot convenience killed it for me. I could see myself liking the powerset. Hell, I like the idea of it. Positive energy is something not very touched upon and open to interpretation. It's perfect for writing about. What sucks is that it wasn't explained well or thought out in a way that made sense to me.

I think a better way to put it would be that the explanation given for the power did not make sense in the context of the story. It would've been fine without trying to explain things, but the story did. Unfortunately, they didn't make any sense to me. There might be something I'm missing, but this is still a lesser problem than the other one.

A forced plot device is always a forced plot device. Especially so when no effort was put into disguising it. The percentages and everything else immediately smacked me in the face with the story having a too-powerful character/ability and not knowing what to do with it. There are ways to get around having crazy powerful abilities without doing something that immediately leaves a sour taste in the reader's mouth when they read it.

Everything is about presentation when it comes to whatever plot device or setup work is done to balance the character for the story. This one just didn't do it for me. It left me feeling cheated out. It wasn't to the point of making me wish the story didn't even include the power in the first place, but it's on its way. It removes character agency for the sake of the plot. It breaks immersion on my end to the point of drawing me out of the fantasy of reading. Breaking that suspension of disbelief ruins things for me.

I think this might be a larger problem with JJK as a whole for me though. A lot of the powers and abilities I saw in the manga and in fics just weren't very well defined. That works on a surface level with a lot of things, but when a piece of media chooses to focus on the particulars of a power/ability it often didn't make sense to me as a lot of general things already hadn't been defined. This makes the following explanation given have to have absolutely outstanding quality to flow well for me.

I think the above is the best way I can put it. I read the manga a while ago, but stopped when I caught up to the most recent translated chapter. It just didn't update quickly enough at the time to keep my attention. Anyway, I've rambled quite a bit. I wish you the best of luck!

~ciao

absolutely in love with this story, keep up the good work.

Awesome chapter

I loved it, good chapter.
I wait for the next chapter.

great new chapter looking forward to seeing what happens next

ohhh yeahhhh

Good chapter.

I suggest that Naruto not marry at a young age. That's very unfortunate. And also add Naruto's old power (chakra), as well as Kurama and Sasuke.