Enticing start! You've created an introspective and melancholic aura around adult Sarah that I really enjoy. I'm excited to see how these versions of Sarah and Jareth interact and how this seemingly disinterested wife of his will handle whatever is coming.

Hell of a start. So much potential. Like the idea of her possibly helping him. Please come back. I definitely want more.

Well written. and very interesting. Looking forward to reading this .

Interesting beginning. looking forward to seeing where you take this journey. I already want to kill the Queen.

Jareth married?! OMG! Until you dropped that bombshell, I was enjoying a unique new twist on the typical Labyrinth stories. Now I am so utterly taken aback by this shocker that I don’t know what to think or feel. Thanks.

Interesting start! I look forward to the next chapter.

Sarah so lonely. What is happening with her?