Reviews for The Last Piece |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Welp. It was great. I enjoyed it. A LOT. But anywho...*bows to your greatness* YIPPIE SKIPPIE! Ava |
![]() ![]() i can only say one thing...WOW! that was one of the greatest stories i have read, and trust me i have read alot of them. and i think ur a great writer so keep going! :) i really liked the last sentance of the story, i luved the way u tied that into the story cuz i was kinda woondering where the title came from when i was just beginning to read it. Neway great story and i hope to read more of ur works bye ~*~R~*~ |
![]() ![]() Hey, Sorry I havent' reviewed for a lot of Chapters I was just so anxious to get to the end. Well I have been writing my story down on paper and decided to change the name of my story. It will not be called. " When all else fails" If you want to read it I'm sorry you have to wait to find out what it is about email me and I will tell and could you also tell me how to register for a story cause I am kind of new to this website. Always a faithful reader, Alysia Gizelle Robledo A.K.A Gabrielle Potter-Malfoy P.S. If you write another story let me know cause I love the way you write |
![]() ![]() Hey, It's just me. I think that it would be great if you wrote the story in Harry's P.O.V. Cause him and Draco think the exact opposite. Hope you had fun. Always a faithful reader, Alysia Gizelle Robledo A.K.A Gabrielle Potter-Malfoy |
![]() ![]() Hey it's me again, I always read the authors notes cause they always tell you important stuff that you need to know about the story. I think that you should have Hermione stay mad and Ron get over it cause he understands. I always knew Hermione would turn out like this sometimes I think she can be so self centered just because she know almost everything. Always a faithful reader, Alysia Gizelle Robledo A.K.A Gabrielle Potter-Malfoy |
![]() ![]() Hey, I love your story sorry I didn't review to your story but I just learned how to review. I love your story. I have read so many good story's and your is one of them I may just be on the 6th Chappie but I can tell it will be good. You are a wonderful writer to come up with a story I am just starting to make my own story. I just don't know if people will like it. Look for it soon it will be called (Harry's Twin). Email me if you want to know about it. () |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, you author you. this is a great story. i really enjoyed it. can't believe all the elements you had in it. it was a journey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I really love this fic. (I've read it a number of times now but I keep coming back!) It's really sweet and wonderful. I have one comment. I know you already have a beta, but sometimes it takes more than one... If you ever need any help I would be more than willing to look over this fic (or any other you're working on) Just let me know But, anyway, good work. |
![]() ![]() great story...keep on writing, you're very talented...and if you ever need a new beta...email me.. :) |
![]() ![]() hermiones potion told her harry was her true love, didn't it? |
![]() ![]() Nice... very very nice. I've always loved Harry and Draco as a couple together but this story simply reinforcements that liking. Only one advice... and that is to fix the very few typo and occasional grammarical errors that I've come to observe when reading your story. This is hardly a big issue, as meanings are not hindered by them at all. However, if you do want to achieve perfection of the technical aspect of this story (meaning the spelling and grammar), it is recommended that they are fixed. Great job and I will be reading your next story for sure. Besides, I have read your very short synopsis when the titles are listed and it sounds interesting, especially for the fact that my favourite couple is there. . Anyway, see ya around... Ja ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Question:Didn't Harry marry a girl named Alexis?Didnt Draco live in loneliness?(sp?)I'm confused |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohmygodohmygodohmygod!Bestest hp/dm slash I've ever read!(and I've read ALOT) |
![]() ![]() OMG! this was the BEST story EVER! you SO have to do a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bloody Brilliant! Bravo! I loved it! The whole story was perfect! Congrats on finnishing it! _ |