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![]() ![]() ![]() Been on this site 15years and never left a note or review before. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for this beautiful fic! *bows |
![]() ![]() I love this story I'm surprised that this doesn't have more reviews. You and your friends truly have a gift |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella can't be turned but maybe she won't age since Edward doesn't. What gift did Bella's grandfather leave for her? I'm guessing that it is that gift that Renee wants. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wasn’t sure if I would like this supernatural story, but I really do! This is a strong Bella. I like her! She and Edward are a much more interesting couple than in canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story. I hope there is eventually a sequel. So many loose ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suppose Bella could cleanse the cross as she did with the objects at Charlie's house. Bella should trying to tell Edward about the nomads. Maybe she can show him the picture she drew if she can't tell him with words, even draw more pictures. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What word caused Bella to get a headache and nose bleed. Tolerate? I think Bella has spells cast on her, possibly by her mom. I thought it was possibly unintentional about it sounds like it might be intentional. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella had a memory, possibly of her Renee. It sounds like Renee knows exactly what she and Bella are. I can't believe she would ignore it and leave Bella struggling like she is. I can't believe Bella broke all of Edward's windows. We know Bella doesn't die by the 3 nomads since the first chapter gives a prequel of her with a red eyed vampire across the room, the dance studio I assume. I guess this chapter proved Bella's magic can work on Edward. She should tell him her blood doesn't bother him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella seems to be able to do so much. She has all the Cullens gifts and more. It seems like she should be able to say to Edward that her blood doesn't affect him using magic. What is she going to do about the marks on her neck. She can not bow out of the dance. She manipulated the situation so now Jessica is going as friends without a date, that wouldn't be fair. There seems to be more to Renee. It seems impossible that Renee doesn't know she is gifted. Plus, Bella not remembering a lot of her childhood seems really sketchy. If it's not Renee's magic that Bella is feeling than whose is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't think who would be calling Bella and hanging up. From Bella's reaction it has to be someone with magic. The only other person we know with magic would be Renee. Maybe Renee knows exactly what she can do and is trying to get Bella to come home. I guess it could be someone we're not aware of yet. I had also wondered if there were going to be repercussions because she took the book, she cant be the only one who wanted it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! So Edward's family doesn't know Bella is different, maybe Alice does. It's hard to believe that Renee doesn't know she's a witch, or at least suspect she is different. Bella's grandmother should have prepared her for what she is. Maybe Renee does know but forbid her mother from telling Bella. Renee's magic might be minimal so she figured Bella's would be also. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Bella was able to stop those men. That also makes me wonder if Bella would be able to control a vampire. If she is than she should be able to take care of herself against the nomads in the woods. It wasn't very nice of Bella robbing that woman of at least 700 dollars. What was up with Bella saving herself as a child? If that really happened then it was like time travel, or something. Hopefully we will get to the really interesting things now, like Bella showing up in the woods. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was pretty crazy. Bella should try to keep to herself until she is able to control what she does. It seems that she does everything, it's pretty crazy how much she is capable of. She definitely shouldn't have invaded Jared's mind like she did, that wasn't cool. Lauren is bitch who likes to start trouble, obviously trouble that would be directed toward Bella. Though, I have to agree with her calling Bella a kiss ass. I don't like how she reads minds to score brownie points or acts like someone she is not. Offering Lauren apples, why? So Lauren would like her? Why would she want her to like her? She is a nasty person. Or pretending she likes the same magazines that Jessica does. |