Great first chapter

Ymir has the needed spiritual organs or whatever to absorb Ethernano? I somewhat expected him to need to run a side quest to get her those or an equivalent. Then again, I don't know much about AoT.

As always that 'Dungeon World' is a treat to read, I love the juxtaposition between the almost happy-go-lucky Fairy Tail POV and the dreadful and depressing reality of that world. It is perhaps my favourite part of this entire story, you're doing a really good job with it!

as always this is just really awesome and I can't wait for more

daaaaamn those stat gains are gnarly. Love this ultimate class stuff! Also that meeting with Mavis is great. very cool development

Thanks for the very good chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

Whole writing style and mc himself is too childish, barely thinking, risking for nothing.

That wisdom score he has came in clutch

Starting to feel like this story isn't for me, he somehow has a set of 'Nightfury' eggs now and got a size altering spell now which I guess is to keep cute and cuddly for the foreseeable future, which again makes it seem like this story isn't really for me.

These "Gacha" tokens also kind of ruined the story for me a bit, they give him so many absolutely ridiculous advantages that even the system using it as currency, seems well dumb, as using them in such a way seems insanely wasteful compared to what they could potentially do.

The number of times you've brought in stuff, from other universes is also a problem, maybe change the genre of the story a bit to include these variables to other reviewers.

I was expecting a lot of things from this story, maybe a bit of added lore to the dragons of this universe, but a lot of the stuff you've added in makes it seem like that isn't going to happen.

I was also expecting maybe a bit more of a realistic take on the magic and people of this universe if I'm being honest.

He's getting too much stuff a little too quickly, I also think you should tone down the different universe items and people, as it really kills the story when its supposed to be about FT.

Like bro, he's getting gacha coins for completing extremely low end quests, that should not be a thing, Feel like this should be extremely rare and hard to get (Like legendary dungeon rare) considering just how easily a lot of the stuff and people your putting in could make him.

Would also like to see him rank up a bit in terms of age and growth.

Excellent chapter

As much as I love this story, when are you going to update race of a wizard?

3 years wasted so author can avoid MC being too strong that he derails Canon. I can't read anymore. Too irritating. Author's hands in the story are too obvious.

A whole year and he's barely done anything...?

This is to keep it on canon's rails right? Come on, do something interesting.

Several things...

Great Wyrm feels like a step down from dragon.

He's a runemaster but we don't get to see much of that. Could have used runes to hide his cave.

Are you going to break from Canon at all? Reading the same story over and over is boring. Mostly just wind up skimming.

Have not seen a status or level screen, or anything really, for several chapters. Why make a gamer story if you're not going to show gamer stuff?