Reviews for The Amulet |
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![]() ![]() Glorifying Snape in 2022, you don't deserve people being nice. Fuck off. |
![]() ![]() Cool three chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Poor Severus, everything is happening so fast he barely has time to react much less think through anything. Good thing there is Felix Filicis working here. Not sure what Lily is thinking about any of this. Dumbledore seems to be having a wonderful time. Love the idea that Dumbledore would try to design a wand for himself that is like a "Little Princess" wand all sparkly and covered in gems. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que bueno que tenga una nueva actualización ,aunque voy a leer desde el principio de nuevo para recordar los detalles finos de la historia. Espero con ansias el próximo capítulo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curious what couldve happened if Harry managed to grab the elder wand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Firstly, I thought the chapter was great. I like the fact that even though Severus is only a year or so in to his spying tenure, his trust with Dumbledore is already strong and only growing stronger. As for Lily, she's put a lid on her grief surprisingly well. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Este desenlace no me lo imaginaba,la piedra filosofal? Fue una idea brillante. Presiento una pelea entre Lily y snape ? Creo que le será difícil y estará en un conflicto muy grande Lily con la situación actual ,perder el último rastro de James (Harry) en un ritual . Calculo que le será muy difícil asimilar estás revelación de quienes era. Aliados y quiénes no. La relación entre ellos seguro tomara bastante tiempo y no se si Lily será capaz de aceptar a la primera el actuar de severus,seguro con el tiempo veran la reconciliación. Me intriga la reacción de Sirius y con el nuevo bebé Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing has improved a ton over the past chapters, especially in terms of polish. And don't mind the edgelords. They'll grow up in a few decades ... lol jk you may wish to consider moderating guest reviews-they are usually never worth it. |
![]() ![]() No, I won't be nice. Trash that pairs a racist with a oppressed minority deserve to fuck off out of this fandom. Now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing either back to Hogwarts or Spinner's End for next chapter? Either way, I'm glad that Harry and Lily have made their appearance, and now that Voldy is gone for now, I'm sure they're relieved that they can rest easy for the moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Este encuentro fue absolutamente genial, como manipuló la situación a su favor y logro engañar. Lo preocupante sería la reacción de Sirius |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start, very interested! |
![]() ![]() Good three chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I brleieve that some of the word choice and character voice could use a bit of revision... |