I am enjoying the way the story is going currently even if you are not in love with this version of the chapter. I am truly enjoy the setting, the perspective shifts that add depth, and the improvement the Akane brings to world around her for good and ill.

This is not what I expected! I LOVE super original ideas like this! So cool. Hopefully Madara didn’t ditch her or something tho lol. Thank you for writing!

I am enjoying the character and world building your doing with your story. Stories with depth are hard to find, looking forward to the next chapter

Awesome!

Keep up the good work! I don’t think I’ve ever been to attached to so many oc characters.

Oh my god I fucking love this thank you so much. Life has been so stressful and your story makes me so happy. I absolutely loved this chapter on cho, she might be one of my favorite characters now.

So Akane died but was brought back to life with the power of bullshit. Did I summarize that correctly? (read in a teasing tone)

Nice. It sets a nice pace with a nice background.

Awesome!

personally i am not agree with you choise about akame not getting the sharingan, unless you choose be a deux-machine and keep live to Naoya and the others members of her family she should awake the sharingan if one of them die specially if they are Naoya and akio

I’m gonna kill these dumb bitches for coming at my girl akane, they need a shuriken to the asshole fr

I hope those Uchiha get punished! Ahh I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Going from almost getting killed to almost getting killed again so quickly with no build up or fight scenes for the second mission is very jarring. Still like the story a lot and looking forward to the next chapter

Awesome!

I liked that twist but since you are implying heavily she is dead, I hope you don't pull a last minute save, If you do so change Chapter 15 so that there is a chance for her to survive.

Hope to see more chapters.