This gave me literal chills i love it thanks for the masterpiece can't wait to read more tomorrow

Awesome!

AYo I’m glad we got Emikos perspective, I thought she’d just sink into the bg.

I like the story so far

Awesome!

Awesome!

THANK YOU THANK YOU! I’ve been so thirsty for Ayumi’s POV! And it was so great. I really do understand her and why she’s behaving like this. I can’t even be upset about it either. It’s easy to be judgemental I think when we as we are now have access to the internet and infinite perspectives people from all around the world, but Ayumi lives in an isolated solitary clan so I totally get why she is the way she is. I hope she’s able to get Akane back in her heart. Also looking forward to seeing Madara. Thank you for writing I loved it as always.

Damn Awesome but im interested in Madaraaaaa!

Love the series so far! Please keep writing it :)

Awesome!

I think it’s great so far, not good at writing myself so my crit is useless, can’t say anything there.

Really well done. I like the fact that she can fight and manage new ideas for the clan BOTH. I like how she is getting help from those around her in a positive way. The mark of a good leader. I would love it if Madara found out what she is doing.

Awesome again!

Awesome!

O. M. G. This was sooo good! Love it! Is the Uchiha clan heir Madara? I can’t fuckinng wait to see how this progresses, I’m totally down for a genuine slow burn romance. Also glad their mom isn’t completely mentally absent. Love this fic and I love the whole thing and ahhh thanks for writing!