Reviews for Fire Away |
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![]() ![]() This story is very good, one of the many problems that plagues other Naruto fanfics is that they make their side look good while making the other one look worse. Yours doesn't have it, the war occured because of the clashes between Uchiha and Senju as they were hired by conflicting contractors, it's natural. Hope, you continue this and don't portray uchiha excessively negative like how other fans think of the Uchiha clan while ignoring their own bias and context. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just wanted to drop a review for your story to get more attention. Really liking it so far. I like the different personalities of the siblings and how Akane really plays an important part in the family dynamic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. This was epic. I really like how you’re doing Akio also, great mix of little baby frail kid and trying to be a Shinobi when that’s so cruel. Also very excited for aka es POV on how this went down. Also I hope Madara really does end up with more brothers than Izuna, that would be so interesting, I think things are about to start kicking off for Akane. thank you for writing and updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job, I wonder if Akane got the sharingan too and definitely want to see her POV or Madara’s POV of the attack. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really really loving the technique she’s trying to develop and I hope it actually pans out, and again let me say the writing is epic, also the auntie dodging bit was funny. AND Akemi’s dream is so wholesome omg. Quick thing, you should change the fic image, since it’s some meme I assumed the writer didn’t care and that it reflected the quality, I almost didn’t click. Something a bit more focused might help, like flames or maybe candles to represent her training? Idk just some suggestions for you. :) love the fic, don’t give up writing! Keep fighting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey so. Your writing is fire. This fic is such a hidden gem, I love it so far! Naoya’s POV is heartbreaking even if he doesn’t realize. I absolutely adore him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really interesting so far, I like what you’ve done with the clan and how it works, I feel like a lot of Uchiha fics don’t even bother with world building the clan. Akane is also very nice, perfect amount of realism, and I like how you didn’t stretch the toddler and baby years. Her mom is also very interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you luck it a nice e begging can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good luck and btw nice story ;) |