Reviews for Beyond Critical
Benny Farr chapter 2 . 12/19/2022
So you changed this character's name as well, ok, Kaito is a better name than Duff anyway, to me at least.

Hopefully Kaito doesn't become anyone's servant, let him be free to do whatever he wants, if he becomes another race, that's cool, as long as he's still a free bird. But whatever direction you'll go, I'll keep on reading.
Nwcleear chapter 2 . 12/19/2022
wait what the fuck this got updated
wonderful day
Shadow Eminence chapter 2 . 12/19/2022
Chad Is back
stuff16 chapter 1 . 12/14/2022
i like your new gamer system and hope you continue this story because i would like to see what you would come up with
unclemurrey chapter 1 . 12/7/2022
If you are still planning on writing this I have it in my follows just waiting. I love the premise and can’t wait to read more
TouchMe-San chapter 1 . 10/6/2022
Really enjoyed the premise and now just patiently waiting on the next chap
kept123 chapter 1 . 8/12/2022
thx
GhostlyDrew chapter 1 . 8/7/2022
I have faith in your style, I know I'll enjoy it.
And not the first time I've read a bit more serious work of yours. One Piece: Rise was a more serious work and even with the odd POV I still thoroughly enjoyed it ~
Theonewithideasfordays chapter 1 . 8/5/2022
Can’t wait for you to update this! No pressure though, good stories take time after all
Son-Of-Scorn chapter 1 . 8/2/2022
You say your trying to move away from the more traditional number based gamer system, have you looked at DarkWolfShiro’s more recent stories as he’s also tried something new with great success.

I’m looking forward to this new type of gamer either way and I hope you update this soon.
juni.clon.ado chapter 1 . 8/1/2022
Goodfd
Funny-Little-Cute White Fox chapter 1 . 7/28/2022
Awesome
Axccel chapter 1 . 7/25/2022
Pretty good start! Looking forward to more!
PSYCongroo chapter 1 . 7/21/2022
Thanks for the chapter.
B127 chapter 1 . 7/20/2022
Good Start
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