Reviews for Beyond Critical |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So you changed this character's name as well, ok, Kaito is a better name than Duff anyway, to me at least. Hopefully Kaito doesn't become anyone's servant, let him be free to do whatever he wants, if he becomes another race, that's cool, as long as he's still a free bird. But whatever direction you'll go, I'll keep on reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait what the fuck this got updated wonderful day |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chad Is back |
![]() ![]() i like your new gamer system and hope you continue this story because i would like to see what you would come up with |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you are still planning on writing this I have it in my follows just waiting. I love the premise and can’t wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed the premise and now just patiently waiting on the next chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() thx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have faith in your style, I know I'll enjoy it. And not the first time I've read a bit more serious work of yours. One Piece: Rise was a more serious work and even with the odd POV I still thoroughly enjoyed it ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait for you to update this! No pressure though, good stories take time after all |
![]() ![]() ![]() You say your trying to move away from the more traditional number based gamer system, have you looked at DarkWolfShiro’s more recent stories as he’s also tried something new with great success. I’m looking forward to this new type of gamer either way and I hope you update this soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goodfd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good start! Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Start |