Reviews for Beyond Critical |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Up to date... It was two awesome days reading this amazing story. Didn't the isekai side of Kaito watched 300? "Give them nothing but take from them EVERYTHING" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could Kaito work to "digest" the King Piece? While it provides a nice boost, it is still technically a foreign power. This means that if it is taken out of him, he will lose the boost. Furthermore, it can be noticed when goes in front of knowledgeable people like Ajuka. Better to completely "digest" it and the power it granted him than to have to explain the circumstances of how he got it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. death threats? make a Google doc so I can laugh please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I really like how you touched on Asia's dragon tamer aspect; nobody ever does that and it really is an interesting concept to expand upon. Also like how you portrayed Ddraig; seems like a more realistic personality than canon honestly. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad to see you bck in the game. You're the only author who has eno stories ilike to be the only author i my fave author list |
![]() ![]() ![]() good shit, as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, keep up the awesome work |
![]() ![]() Actually, one of your commends suggested turning Issei into a chick, that sounds even better. -Cackle- Oh man, I shed tears from that one. |
![]() ![]() Ah yes, the soon to be newly crowned Cuck Dragon Emperor. I cackled realizing what Issei is going to probably wind up going by. Love to see a new chapter from you and I hope you get all the death threats you could ever want, and a good rest of your week, Jordinio. |
![]() ![]() Good on Kaito for being iron willed enough to disregard his instincts and Asia essentially begging him to bend her over and fuck her senless good on him Also I feel like Ddraig is going to start working on how to make Kaito his main host and leave no fragment of his soul in Issei |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great new chapter! I really dont understand how people can send death threat about pathetic characters like Deku and Issei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Deku probed my point he didnt change at all he was a useless piece of work from begining to end... the red flag was there but crazy fans where in denial. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forgive me for I am about to sin by suggesting this but who here thinks that after some time kaito is gonna go to azazel and permanently turn issei into a girl and have one of the best hatefuck of his life |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARE YOU SH*TING ME!? THE CHURCH GIRL IS THE ONE SUGGESTING THE HAREM! XD Aah This is AWESOME! |