Snow White’s tenacity and ferocious optimism really came through this chapter from the third person. I love love love seeing her and Dazai’s relationship from the third person and THANK YOU for this alternate ending where Odasaku survives and leaves the mafia. This is definitely the “sunshine and sunshine protector” characterization and it’s so cute! The development of their relationship from her forcing everything, to him asking her to move in with him? I was kicking my feet 3 they have such a cute dynamic.
My qualm about the first one shot was how she would be able to transport herself with Dazai since he nullifies her ability and since she relies so heavily on her mirror ability to escape, it seems like it would be a key scene in the development of their relationship. Additionally, Dazai is extremely cunning and goal-oriented so I wonder why he doesn’t make Snow White do any recon for him? She probably would if he asked her to even if it was for mafia related activity. Despite my questions, I seriously loved this story and how well the characters were developed and then changed over the course of events!

Will you continue this?

Will you continue this?

I really enjoyed that story! Especially your characterisation of Dazai. It felt in line with the anime/manga. Well done!

I honestly cannot explain how much I love the way you write I don’t know if there’s going to be more, but if there is, I can’t wait

Just as good as the last chapter, just a different flavor. I'm stuck between I want to see more of this and being happy that it's a complete work on it's own. Thank you for it though, it's still a wonderful piece!

I loved it

Wonderful, funny, full of character story. 3

What gift would I want? I love being powerful, but that's only in character and not aligned with me. A gift that is more useful than powerful; I could only think of if I touched anything with my gift, it will become considerably lighter depending on its' original weight.

Esto es hermoso me encanta la escritura y a blanca nieves.

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ah another marvelous work from you. i can always count you to surprise me with your stories.

I loved it so much... I wish it would continue, it was so nice to read ️

Thank you so much for writing this. I really loved the slow changes in Dazai and would love if you made a second chapter to this oneshot.

That was adorable friend I loved this one shot so much.

Amazing work as always.