YEAH! TAKE THAT DAMIAN!

Wow, I never thought of this, but I can actually see some of this happening if Pikachu really did ditch Ash in canon.

I got to where Ash first encounters Charmander in the story before switching to a better device to read this and wanted to leave a review before continuing.

I’m loving the character portrayals of our little group and how there’s a mixup of what is caught.

Well, I’ll get back to reading. I hope that you’re having as much fun writing this as I am reading it.

Ash TG Tessa By TG Princesses Rosalina By BatJap.

RETURN to THIS story PLEASE ! keep THIS story going PLEASE! ! ! ! !

were ALL BEGGING YOU PLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE THIS AMAZING STORY ! ! praying hands

Love it so far! Hope you and Cloud are doing well! (And not to forget your beta, cherry, hope they're well too!)

I think that was the perfect situation to see Mystic evolve! Any chance we'll see Shades again soon? I don't think we've seen him since he was caught.

I had no idea you restarted this! I'm glad to see it making a comeback, I loved the original, mistakes and all, and I'm now fully ready to read this one and see where you take it!

I want to ask you 4 things. 1. What differences are there between the anime and this fanfic? 2. It takes place throughout the anime, right? 3. Are the locations in this fanfic the same as in the anime? 4. How old is anyone in the fanfic? Be sure to respond to this.

love it

continue sooooon plllleeeeaaaasssseeeeee! !

Hi, Chris Ketchum.

I'm really liking what you have so far. I'll honest, I'm missing the other Pokemon stories you had before, it's a shame you deleted them.

But anyway, there's a little request I wanted to ask of you. Can you have Ash catch 8 Eevee, so he can help them evolve into all the evolutions? If not, can you just go with Espeon & Glaceon, like in the first stories, please?

And if you don't mind, could you mention & reply my request in your next chapter, or the one after, please?

So Ash won't be getting Evlon, the eevee?

Giving Ash a Jotho pokemon early huh? Not a bad idea.

I really like this chapter and how you made Mystic evolve. It really shows the bond between Ash and his Pokémon.

Very nice.

I definitely like the divergence from canon with the Pokemon Tech characters, and its really the best option.

Going out into the real world and gaining experience is the only way to become a great trainer.

Nice touch with the egg, as more than likely it turns out to be a Dratini, Eevee, Riolu or something, so I like the addition of Magby.

Though, I advise on SolarBeam, for when it evolves into Magmar, as a counter for Water-types, and I think it was Gen 4, when many Fire-types had that in their moves as a counter.