Reviews for The Great Escape
Natalie4q6 chapter 1 . 5/17
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Bronze chapter 26 . 12/18/2024
I just searched for whether or not Harry giving the twin the tri-wizards winnings was canon or fanon and it's canon. And of course, Good Ole Fumblemort has a plan if Harry doesn't show for the second task. He plans for just about everything else. Admittedly he didn't plan for Harry escaping the school, but it never occurred to him that Harry WOULD do something like that. But being the control freak that he is, of course, he has a plan to either find Harry or drag him back from wherever he is.
Bronze chapter 25 . 12/18/2024
Having three forms will make it that much harder for Good Ole Fumblemort along with the Death Eaters realizing that are all three are the same person. Though the ministry will want them to register their forms. However, seeing as it is believed in Britain that you can have only one form, they could register any one of them and be legal. It'd be funny if Harry told Sirius this method and see if he finds any other form(s). But the very next thing Harry has to do is get the hell out of Britain. He won't truly be safe till he's well out of Good Ole Fumblemort's control.
Bronze chapter 24 . 12/18/2024
Personally, I enjoy those fics where Harry becomes a Dragon. But that's not gonna happen in this fic. I foresee one little problem with Harry taking his OWLs and NEWTS this early. WHERE he'll take them. I can't see him going to the British ministry as they'll just turn him back over to Good Ole Fumblemort. Sure, he can take them almost anywhere, but the problem is getting out of the country first. And I can't see the ministry of/for morons allowing him to. How would it look if the Savior of the Wizarding World took his Owls and Newts in France? Now if Harry gave a magical oath that he didn't put his name in the Goblet of Fire to someone like Skeeter after forcing her to take an oath to print exactly what he said, that would really upset Fudge and Good Ole Fumblemort.
Bronze chapter 23 . 12/18/2024
It's quite obvious that Daphne has it bad for Harry and he feels the same for her. But once they get out Harry'll still be dodging Good Ole Fumblemort and his disorder of the flaming turkey. There's just no way he'll allow his weapon to simply walk away from the destiny he's personally selected for him. As I don't know if there are Horcruxes in this or not, should Harry have one in his forehead that would be the reason why Good Ole Fumblemort won't allow him to walk away. He plans for Harry to die fighting Vulturewurst and thus destroy the Horcrux in Harry. If on the other hand, there are no Horcruxes in this then that just means Good Ole Fumblemort has some other reason for wanting Harry to die. Like maybe Harry has a shit ton of money he'll inherit at 17 or when he passes his NEWTS.
Guest chapter 22 . 12/17/2024
It obviously wasn't hard to be a better teacher than either Binns and Snape as they are the absolute bottom of the barrel as professors in Hogwash. The others are hampered by a meddling old fraud who thinks he knows what's best for the entire magical world. And thus, has destroyed what was once the best magical school in the world.
Bronze chapter 21 . 12/17/2024
Good Ole Fumblemort is gonna be even more unhappy with Harry when the time dilation ends. I do wonder if the goblet will take Harry's magic or the one responsible for his name being in it. Seeing as both Good Ole Fumblemort as well as Tommy-boy are the ones maybe they will lose their magic instead. No great loss in either case. Now, if all the marked Death Eaters are linked through their Dark Marks, then it stands to reason that if Tommy-boy loses his magic, he'll attempt to drain them to remain in the living world. As Good Ole Fumblemort claimed Harry's Magical Guardianship, as Harry's Magical Guardian shouldn't he have had the power to forbid Harry from competing? Yet, he not only allowed it he lied about being helpless. And that also makes him partially responsible. I'd very much enjoy reading that both sides of this stupidity got what they very deserved.
Scabbers1957 chapter 29 . 12/3/2024
This is an very interesting and entertaining story.
I'll add it to my alerts and favorites.
:))
Jessica Doughten chapter 29 . 12/1/2024
I am so glad that you are continuing this story. I love it! It is very enjoyable to watch the awkwardness of teenagers falling in love for the first time. I hope you continue this story and appreciate the effort you’ve put in so far.
Bronze chapter 17 . 11/24/2024
This could very well be a problem. Harry and Daphne are in the manor but have no desire to return to Hogwash. Which is the very reason why these two are there. But I really doubt that the Greengrass family will give them up.
Bronze chapter 16 . 11/24/2024
I have to wonder just how bad things would get for Good Ole Fumblemort if Amelia Bones saw those memories the Goblins had. And if he added in his so-called homelife, I think Fumbles would be the one arrested for accessory to child abuse at the very least. The only real reason that Fumblemort wants Harry back is to fight Vulturewurst. It wouldn't hurt his plans any for Vulturewurst to use Harry's blood to regain a body either. But I don't see that happening.
Bronze chapter 15 . 11/24/2024
This sounds so similar to another HP fic I read. Lily and James signed a marriage contract between Daphne and Harry. They also set up an escape for them to Alaska where there was a house waiting for them. They spent several weeks in a time chamber to finish their schooling and then get married. Of course, none of this was even hinted at to Good Ole Fumblemort. So, Harry escaping Durskaban set off a major manhunt for Harry. The Horcrux in Harry's scar was removed and his eyes healed during Time Dilation. From England, they went to Fla for a cruise to the Bahamas and back. Then a cross-country drive collecting memories along the way. They stopped in two different states to take their OWLS and NEWTs far apart to make tracing them harder. Fumbles had Tonks asking in the ministry office for education if any OWLS scores for Ha
Guest chapter 14 . 11/24/2024
Reading your author's note I had to really say " DAAA! " about Astoria's age. After all, if it looks like a Duck, quacks like a Duck, waddles like a Duck then there's a pretty good chance it's a Duck! Astoria acts like a child between 7-10 yrs. old. So, I thought that's her age. Now the Greengrass family is typically written as being Slytherins and there's nothing wrong with that. Slytherin does not equate to being evil. Sneaky? Yes! Draco IS NOT a typical Slytherin! He's much more like a Gryffindor. Brash and in your face without thinking first. The Greengrass family really show the traits that Slytherin's want to be known for. They're also smart enough not to take sides in this upcoming war. Doesn't matter which side wins. They'll only lose. Better to stay neutral and let the idiots fight it out.
Brikas2 chapter 29 . 11/20/2024
I really like this story!
Bronze chapter 13 . 11/17/2024
This is going to be a slow-burn romance if Harry's going to be with Daphne. She's sure in no hurry to be involved with him. I'm not entirely sure Harry should respond till just before he leaves. If Good Ole Fumblmort can trace the letters to their source, I wouldn't put it past him to either pop in and take Harry willingly or not or send Fawkes to simply flame travel Harry back to his office. I seriously doubt he'd send Snape to make the snatch. There's always the possibility of Harry seeing him first and taking him out. After all, it's not like Harry has any trust in the man.
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