Reviews for Ashykit's Destiny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello author, since you like to write why don't you try to write on another platform? you can also increase your readers and income! You can reach me on my social media [editorwn .emma] or PM and I will send you the details, thank you |
![]() ![]() STFU HATERS! STARKIT'S PROPHECY IS THE BEST EVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FanfictionGang512 Excuse me, but anyone who writes a story straight out of 2005 entitled "Mental Chaos" cannot complain about anyone else's story. Let me remind you: you're not a mod and have no power over anything anyone else on this site does. Cry about it, I guess. Another word of advice, saying "I am not trying to be rude, and being a sucker for the rules isn’t all that bad when it comes down to it," makes you sound out-of-touch. Please leave this poor child alone and let them write their story. Wildebunny the Eternal "For anyone unacquainted with such stuff" I'm just here to point out that the same commenter haranguing this young writer has written a story entitled "Nick Ejaculates too Much" (Rated T which could very well allow children to read this filth) with the caption "Judy moves in with Nick, and she can't handle his nightly ejaculations. It doesn't help that tomorrow is her birthday. The problem is bad enough that she sees Sharla for relationship advice. Her friend is now a licensed therapist in Bunnyburrow." The target audience of Zootopia is children, so please stop criticizing someone who clearly could be harmed by the garbage you decide to post on this website. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The errors are intentional and part of the "charm." For anyone unacquainted with such stuff. |
![]() ![]() Uhm, quite a few parts of this story are confusing and I don't really understand what the writer (sugar-maples) is trying to say. I'm not sure that you are going to be much help to your friend. But it seems that you both need to find help. Both writing-wise and mentally. :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wildebunny the Eternal Imagine writing "Nick Ejaculates Too Much" and then criticizing someone else's story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ones that are listed as male are men, also the ones lsted as women are female. Im not sure excly what u ment by tha t. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And yet another Starkit's Prophecy tribute. Give it a rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would you so kindly please list your character's pronouns? :3 |