Reviews for Harry Potter and the Stitch in Time |
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![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The trap was mostly successful, Bella got away but her being insane probably didn't hurt there either. Breaking down Tom's minions into categories could help them capture/kill some inner circle DEs who come along to supervise their 'trainees'. Harry giving a practical defensive demonstration and then discussing the pros and cons will help the students learn, and possibly one day save their lives. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for an enjoyable chapter. I wish though that they had not felt compelled to reveal that the "girl" was a raven. They lost that element of surprise for little of value. |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter, keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying it, but need to know if the raven is ok |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() training is always a good thing. too bad Sirius didn't catch itttl murdering bella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Merci pour le chapitre |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice update |
![]() ![]() ![]() : ) good update it was enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dislike children but I feel sorry for the orphaned raven. According to collinsdictionary dot com counterattack should be one word. As should "sidestep". You meant "he shifted into Padfoot" and "amounts to cannon fodder". According to collinsdictionary dot com right-handed needed a hyphen. As should "high-rise". And "slip-up". And "last-minute". And "life-or-death". I have never had custard cream biscuits. And for the last two weeks of January I and many of my coleagues attended an Audio Preservation Training Programme in our building where there was cheap chicory powder (probably just like the coffee Sirius got him and Amelia) pretending to be instant cofffee on offer each tea break and lunch. I am not used to taking a formal tea or lunch break when working but the very basic catered lunches were nice to have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t wait for next week to come. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. But didn't you say that Proudfoot died last chapter? |
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