|Reviews for The Blessing|
| tacaloking chapter 6 . 7/11/2016
i came across a couple of your early storys and loved them it was during my teen years before i made a account so i could so my joy for the storys i loved and because i lost my internet and wanted to favorite all the fanfiction i like so i can make sure i can read it no matter were i am i read you thought all your old work sucked but i love your storys and i find this one to be a great story it really does have fun twist and turns and had a great journey i only found less then five fanfictions that i found that has ranma going to america that aren't complete trash and i think i read even more fanfiction then you im sad you are most likely done with fanfiction but i hope one day you find your muse again and come back your one of the best writers that write ranma one half fanfiction
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/5/2015
I love this Fic you did a great job however there is one thing and that is when Jusenkyo talks to Ranma he should have said something like
"This isn't a blessing it's a nightmare now if I had been given control over it and whether or not I'm locked then that would have been a blessing instead of being locked in curse form for the third time"
or later when it and her guy form are trying to convince her she should stated that it was neither and she was going kill herself
| Ranmazon chapter 18 . 10/5/2015
After saying "one left along with a possible epilogue"
HOW IN THE F %ing HELL HAVE YOU NOT FINISHED IT?!
| Chaosqueen chapter 18 . 10/5/2015
11 years ago you said you have two chapters left
WHERE ARE THEY?
FINISH IT, PLEASE!
| SoulboundAlchemist chapter 18 . 12/14/2014
Oh come ON! Don't leave it here! You need to finish it!
| edale chapter 18 . 11/26/2014
I've seen incomplete stories lying abandoned for years, but to see a fic 1 chapter from completion while the author is still an active writer boggles the mind.
| Ranmamania chapter 18 . 12/3/2013
SON OF A MOTHERF &%ing B!# how can you leave a fic with a F &%ing cliffhanger for 9 years?... UPDATE the damn thing
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
Weird how she faked an amnesia and now got a real amnesia XD
| Lerris chapter 6 . 3/5/2012
It is worth noting, that while Ranma may be able to handle the bad guys, the rest of the class could not dodge bullets. Ranma should have waited for a better opportunity... Also catching bullets is pushing it for plausibility...
| Rose1948 chapter 17 . 1/7/2012
You need to proof read. Badly. Seriously. ::nods:: And finish this as well.
| akibara chapter 18 . 6/24/2011
Akane gets what she deserves huh?
You realize everyone in that series deserves quite a bit of backhanding other than her, Akane is the only one in the series who has almost always stood by Ranma's side, Much like Rei and Usagi, they fight but theyre always on the same team, they ALWAYS back eachother up.
In the end I suppose I'm wasting my breath, so I'll simplify things for you by cutting out some of the insults and replacing them with copious examples, Non Akane/Ranma pairings do not require you to murder Akane's character, and if the authors notes in 18 are anything to go by, youre a horrible person. Akane deserves nothing less than a slap on the wrist and some forced therapy. She has problems and can be hatefull and cruel, but as far as the bad shit is always happening to me meter, Akane is a fierce and competitive Rival to Ranma. She for nearly a year had to fight multiple opponents daily to not get raped, gets in wedlocks to people she either does not want or is unready to marry, has the 'affections' of several stalkers, rival fiancees out for her blood, A perverted old man always trying to steal her undergarnments, she's saddled with an emotional cripple of a father, An older sister who's so into her serene mother/replacementgoldfish front she downright ignores all of Akane's problems, a sister who sells child pornography of her, and a fiancee who's emotional problems she is not Ready to deal with considering her own, Everyone gives Ranma plenty of credit since he goes through a lot but Akane goes through nearly as much, Some of Ranma's problems are down right trivial compared to Akane's although others are worse. You Think the solution is to give Akane MORE problems and not less? she needs help, not ACC psycho's like you, hell bent on writing rage fics for characters you don't like.
| aki chapter 18 . 3/21/2011
Akane gets what she deserves moral of the fic? thats your moral? Revenge and making Akane out of character?
Well I'm glad i skipped to the ending note to find that out. I will never stop being surprized at the lunatics the Anti akane club draws out of the wood work, why cant you morons hate/dislike a character without going kuno?
| bad234 chapter 18 . 2/9/2011
cool how does it end?
| Shanami chapter 18 . 11/26/2009
So, I noticed this story a while ago, and decided to reread part of it today, and I thought I'd leave a comment since it is one of the more unique Ranma stories that I've ever read.
I really like the premise, in fact, I think the idea of perfectly balanced water temperature wise having an effect on the curse is quite brilliant, and I would like to see it used in different fics. I also really liked the idea of Ranma becoming the Dragon equivalent to Saffron, mostly because the dragon form is both cool and would have fit just fine into the original, nutty Ranmaverse.
However, while I like many aspects of this fic, and I think it is one of your better fics due to the originality of the ideas (the only ones that can compete in my mind are Gin and Kin and The Anarchists), I do not like the interactions between Ranma and many of the people he meets. The dialogue (and I realize that this is a very old story) is a bit too pat in most cases, in that you reach your points far faster than people generally talk. Not that I can write anywhere near the level of dialogue that you do, especially in your more recent fics where you have grown beyond this.
I'd also like to have seen a bit more on the psychological ramifications of Ranma choosing to become female, and I don't like the idea of a spirit of Jusenkyo, it is a bit too much of a crutch to force the story in a direction that you easily could have taken anyway. In fact, if you were to just keep the idea of a neutral temp water locking, in conjunction with the dragon form, and were to write a story about Ranma accepting his female side, it would be more interesting to read.
Personally, I'd love to see a rewrite of this, since it contains many of your more interesting ideas. I'm still a firm believer that Ranko is and always should be a lesbian, because to me, realizing that she doesn't have to like guys is the turning point in any fic where Ranma accepts his female side at all, except in very specific circumstances. That said, some dating on both sides of the coin would be a good developmental strategy to showcase her emotional status dealing with being locked.
I suppose I'm just rambling. However, I really do enjoy many of the ideas presented in this story, and would love to see more of it, or a rewrite. Though, I'd much rather see more of Gin and Kin or The Anarchists. While Her War seems to be your main project right now, I just can't get into it, far too depressing. Brilliantly written, but downright disturbing.
| peter chapter 18 . 6/3/2009
it is a good story to read and wonder if ranma does become a god or goddess because of the archbishop to fight saffron. it will be fun to read the new chapters.