Reviews for Tsunami of the South |
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![]() ![]() ![]() also please no multiple self inserts. they always ruin a story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so koda is a avatar now? ngl I kinda don't like that decision. would've been cool if a water bender just ended the war himself without the need of a avatar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh... that was an entirely pointless message. Hope he's learned his lesson. Next time, be sure to dispense your own knowledge as cryptically as you possibly can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like having the Southern Water Tribe become similar to the Polynesian or Philippine cultures would be best, shipbuilding and sailing while living off of what the island(s) provide. Not to mention the war bands and tribal rituals sound pretty similar. Also, buddy for Appa later! I know in LoK there is the assumption that wild Bison herds survived Sozin, but still a nice plot point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The flying bison is cool though quite unfortunate that the bison is a male instead of a female. Appa is a male bison as well and it would have been quite lucky if the protagonist had found a female that in time could mate with appa to continue their race. I like the idea of the water tribe seeking better grounds to live in though im skeptical of the venture since they will be much easier to attack. The southern water tribe wouldn't be able to fight off a full invasion by the fire nation. That being said the southern water tribe needs a chance to do more than just survive but a chance to thrive so perhaps this gamble will work out. Im not a huge fan of how negative you have made Hakoda in this fic but it doesn't bother me that much. I hope the prophecy doesn't mean more self inserts All in all thought it has been quite fun to read this story and I hope to see it continue to update so we may see where you go from here! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Seems good. I'm super conflicted on if I want Koda to learn airbending or not. On the one hand, I find airbending very cool. On the other, making Koda too powerful could mess with future dynamics. Maybe he could be able to learn airbending to level 10 or so? Enough that it's possible, and he has to work hard for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() spirit bending? that's new. wasn't the only other character who could do that the girl who turned into the moon? or was that something else? I was kinda hoping for a blood bending healing skill |
![]() ![]() there bound to be a few peaple there, deserters some fishermen fro kyushi etc , the fact that so many of the wtaer tribesmen are violent idiots makes sense, in reality most peaple werejust look at Lamellar armour worn by native Siberians leather reinforced by wood and bones worn by native Siberians and Eskimos or inuit as they are known now wikipedia/commons/thumb/2/20/%D0%9A%D0%BE%D0%B6%D0%B0%D0%BD%D1%8B%D0%B9_%D0%BF%D0%B0%D0%BD%D1%86%D0%B8%D1%80%D1% /330px-%D0%9A%D0%BE%D0%B6%D0%B0%D0%BD%D1%8B%D0%B9_%D0%BF%D0%B0%D0%BD%D1%86%D0%B8%D1%80%D1% or wikipedia/commons/thumb/4/44/Koryak_ /330px-Koryak_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think this is my favorite of your stories. i could never enjoy ladder due to the setting. |
![]() ![]() Please don’t make the mc an idiot |
![]() ![]() you should post this on spacebattles and alt history its a good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Senseless killing? Dude, this war has been going on for a fucking century. The fire nation committed genocide on the air nomads. Can you imagine just how much blood they have on their hands? Half measures are just not going to fucking cut it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honor has no place in war. If this ignorant idiot ever becomes Chief, they’re all fucked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more! |