Lmao. W AC refrence

I get it that people pointing out grammar mistakes could be annoying, but still there should be a level of editing done so there isn’t so many mistakes. I don’t care about the deviation from cannon, however, because this is a fic and it’s supposed to have deviation especially when an outside element is introduced to the equation with a major impact like Harry.

Its filled to the brim and there are 50 thousand people there? I thought the capacity was 100 thousand

I’m curious. If Draco remembers his last life, does he know Harry is Harry or no? Cause considering that Harry named him Draco, and named passages and forts after his friends, it should be plenty obvious

I hope the grammar gets better later on cause this is unbearable. “Not only did she got”? Either you are a young person writing or you are a non native speaker much like myself, but for someone to be able to write, they need to at least have a grasp on the basics of the grammar in the language they are writing in.

Damn i am sorry to hear that (in regards to your authors note at the beginning) i for one have thoroughly enjoyed the story so far. I hope this doesn’t keep you from continuing to write other fics. People are assholes. Keep your head up and morale high my friend for you have a talent that many do not.

Your story is very interesting. I particularly like the economy building. Thank you for sharing your story

Loved that quote, it's rare to find someone who quotes Beowulf in their stories.

Oh man, this chapter was excellent! Rivendell coming to Westeros was just the cherry on top.
I hope you have a proper 'falling from grace' planned for Catelyn, as I cannot stand that woman. Never have been able to.

Not gonna lie, I couldn't help smiling when I heard the name Floki. And if you're planning on modeling the character on the one I'm thinking of, I'll love you even more.

I thought her hair was pinkish red.

Loved the A Knights Tale reference.

Thank you for making them piss and shit his pants (XD)

There is one thing going in my mind whenever I read this fic, (please keep in mind I've never actually finished this fic yet), and that is something that Harry/Delianah might say in response to something degrading Lord Walder might say. "Look at me! You say I am nothing but a little girl, but I have climbed from bastard to highborn, and from woman to man! I have defied all expectations and limitations that have been thrust upon me. I will not be talked down to in my own home."

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