|Reviews for The Shadows Within|
| GendryMightBeComingBackSoon chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
A great poem fic. Very well written.
| Yumi-oni-san chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
That was really awesome, a little weird and creepy, but awesome
| Kiina chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
why didn't I review it earlier?
*bangs head against her wall*
Awesome work my friend!
| Amandil chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I really liked that!it was neat!
| ola chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
hee hee, only now read your review. sorry if you kept waiting for me to read your story *grins*
nice work. ) i mean it too! ) and what you say in the poem is actually true, not just a bunch of rhyming lines. and i'll try to read and review your other fics too, although right now i don;t have the time for ANYthing! *raves and rants about papers and science projects. gah!*
oops...anyway, yeah, that was a realy nice work )
and thank you so much for your nice review!
| CristinatheGrEeNToMaTo chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
When i read your poem
I feel like i want to
*mich übergeben *lol nonono
Just kidding ...
Your poem is good , not very good,and not less good NO i mean only good. U understand ? *gg probably not.
Guess what comes next...
-No your guess was wrong :-(
Now i will tell you why i didnt like your poem as much as i like your story
1... It is short
2... It means less
3... Deamn it! what is with the fucking poems that you have showed me school ? DO NOT SAY THAT YOUVE ALLREADY EATEN IT ! AND DO NOT SAY THAT YOU HAVE USED IT THE CLOSET !(puuh this is not a very delicious thought*giggle so let us come to point 4 )
4...Deamn it another time ! Why are you allways so depressiv ? Is it because of your neighbour in school ? ( i dont want to say names but lets say that your neighbour in class is called ..äämm...Clatschii for ecample. *laughing and rolling on se floor )
5... WHere is the love ? Shoudnt be there a bit more love in your poem ? Shoudnt we bee a bit more friendlyer to our nature and friends ? :...
NO WE SHOUd NOT ! *hähä And NO TEHRE SHOD NOT BE A BIT MORE LOVE IN YOUR POEM ! *another hähähä
6...GUGUCK the kebappmen is here . TSCHELATII TSCHELATII :...(
Ok this 6 points were the things tht i didnt like your poem : I hope you will mind them becuse if not ...thenn...
I will kill you with the *schweizertaschenmesser that i have hidden in my bag . U understand ?
probably not *gg
ps.: how did you feel our maths test today ?
Do not forget : I am allways near you *gg If you need me call me nomather you are nomather how far i will be there in a hurry dont worry , cause baby theres aint no mountain high enough aint no valley low enough aint now river whaid enough TO keep me from you ...*siing and shouting out loud till the neighbours call the police *löl
| Tialys chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Sorry, sorry, sorry! I really thought I had reviewed this but I hadn't (bad me!)
Anyway; very good poem. I've not a big fan of elf fics but that was so sad! Poor elves!
"For some choose the wrong path" really creeped me out ;) Keep it up!
Sorry again I didn't review a lot sooner!
~*~ Tialys ~*~
| ElanorII chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
Oh, das ist schön...
Ich muss sagen, dass ich nicht oft Gedichte lese, aber dieses ist wirklich gut.
Schreibst du es noch weiter? ...es ist do kurz ;)
PS: Hast nichts dagegen, dass ich dir auf deutsch reviewe, oder? *grins*
| Sarah chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
I like it! But then, like you, I am also kinda loony and depressed, I like the stuff you write! Very cool!
| holly chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Cool! i have to mention that i am crap at poems, but yours (well, this one that i've read) are brilliant! keep it up! are you doing any more poems? or continuing this one?
| Elanor8 chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
very,very dark thoughts.
I think sometimes we all must fight against the shadows from within...*sigh*
But it is an good work.
Do it again !
| Your Fan chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
No! I am your Fan and I am not going to leave you!
Please updait soon!
P.s.:I am always near you. I'll read every story you write. '-'
| Elizabeth chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
I love it..it's so dark and haunting. Absolutely beautiful.
| Seylin chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
OMG! I LOVED IT! Nobody has ever written a peom like it...um...i think. LOL! Oh well I loved the poem! It is just so true! Ok well Ja Ne Mellon Nin! Can't wait 4 the next thing!
| Kiina chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Hey to read it self is much better then only to hear you on the phonegr
but really col
really I think this is your bast english text!
great ...really it's not you...I hope you will write more of this!