Reviews for The Shadows Within
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
A great poem fic. Very well written.
Yumi-oni-san chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
That was really awesome, a little weird and creepy, but awesome
Kiina chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
...
*breathless pause*
O.O
Damn...
that was...
why didn't I review it earlier?

*bangs head against her wall*
argh...
sorry...
lol

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Awesome work my friend!
Amandil chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I really liked that!it was neat!
great work!
ola chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
hee hee, only now read your review. sorry if you kept waiting for me to read your story *grins*
nice work. ) i mean it too! ) and what you say in the poem is actually true, not just a bunch of rhyming lines. and i'll try to read and review your other fics too, although right now i don;t have the time for ANYthing! *raves and rants about papers and science projects. gah!*
oops...anyway, yeah, that was a realy nice work )
and thank you so much for your nice review!
CristinatheGrEeNToMaTo chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
:..WOW..:

When i read your poem

I feel like i want to

*mich übergeben *lol nonono

Just kidding ...

Your poem is good , not very good,and not less good NO i mean only good. U understand ? *gg probably not.

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Guess what comes next...

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-No your guess was wrong :-(

Now i will tell you why i didnt like your poem as much as i like your story

1... It is short

2... It means less

3... Deamn it! what is with the fucking poems that you have showed me school ? DO NOT SAY THAT YOUVE ALLREADY EATEN IT ! AND DO NOT SAY THAT YOU HAVE USED IT THE CLOSET !(puuh this is not a very delicious thought*giggle so let us come to point 4 )

4...Deamn it another time ! Why are you allways so depressiv ? Is it because of your neighbour in school ? ( i dont want to say names but lets say that your neighbour in class is called ..äämm...Clatschii for ecample. *laughing and rolling on se floor )

5... WHere is the love ? Shoudnt be there a bit more love in your poem ? Shoudnt we bee a bit more friendlyer to our nature and friends ? :...

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NO WE SHOUd NOT ! *hähä And NO TEHRE SHOD NOT BE A BIT MORE LOVE IN YOUR POEM ! *another hähähä

6...GUGUCK the kebappmen is here . TSCHELATII TSCHELATII :...(

Ok this 6 points were the things tht i didnt like your poem : I hope you will mind them becuse if not ...thenn...

I will kill you with the *schweizertaschenmesser that i have hidden in my bag . U understand ?

probably not *gg

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ps.: how did you feel our maths test today ?

Do not forget : I am allways near you *gg If you need me call me nomather you are nomather how far i will be there in a hurry dont worry , cause baby theres aint no mountain high enough aint no valley low enough aint now river whaid enough TO keep me from you ...*siing and shouting out loud till the neighbours call the police *löl

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Tialys chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Sorry, sorry, sorry! I really thought I had reviewed this but I hadn't (bad me!)

Anyway; very good poem. I've not a big fan of elf fics but that was so sad! Poor elves!

"For some choose the wrong path" really creeped me out ;) Keep it up!

Sorry again I didn't review a lot sooner!

~*~ Tialys ~*~
ElanorII chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
Oh, das ist schön...

Ich muss sagen, dass ich nicht oft Gedichte lese, aber dieses ist wirklich gut.

Schreibst du es noch weiter? ...es ist do kurz ;)

*bettel*

Gruß,

Elanor

PS: Hast nichts dagegen, dass ich dir auf deutsch reviewe, oder? *grins*
Sarah chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
I like it! But then, like you, I am also kinda loony and depressed, I like the stuff you write! Very cool!
holly chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Cool! i have to mention that i am crap at poems, but yours (well, this one that i've read) are brilliant! keep it up! are you doing any more poems? or continuing this one?
Elanor8 chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Hi,

very,very dark thoughts.

I think sometimes we all must fight against the shadows from within...*sigh*

But it is an good work.

Do it again !

Elanor :-)
Your Fan chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
No! I am your Fan and I am not going to leave you!

Please updait soon!

P.s.:I am always near you. I'll read every story you write. '-'
Elizabeth chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
I love it..it's so dark and haunting. Absolutely beautiful.
Seylin chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
OMG! I LOVED IT! Nobody has ever written a peom like it...um...i think. LOL! Oh well I loved the poem! It is just so true! Ok well Ja Ne Mellon Nin! Can't wait 4 the next thing!
Kiina chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Hey to read it self is much better then only to hear you on the phonegr

but really col

really I think this is your bast english text!

great ...really it's not you...I hope you will write more of this!