Reviews for The Criminal Consultant |
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![]() ![]() Please update this story it’s awesome and I’m absolutely sure there’s many people who feel the same way. That is a Naruto reference in the title |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Izuku ever going to get a Holmes? An actual, singular rival. So far, the best options I can see are Nighteye, Nezu, or maybe Tsukauchi. Of course, in the books, Holmes wins, so... Actually that'd be a pretty cool line: "You consider yourself the Holmes of our story. But there's a single, crucial detail that makes that impossible; Holmes. Wins." I'm not saying you need to use it, fuck no. Don't let me - or anyone - tell you how to write your story. I just thought it was cool and wanted to share it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how the fic is turning out, kirishima having one for all in my opinion makes it easier to either manipulate him to eventually handing it over to izuku or have the current user as a pawn (knowingly or unknowingly). Kinda hope you eventually get class 1a under midoriya's control, the likes of uraraka, todoroki and hagakure have the most cause to eventually join izuku/moriarty with the current changes you've made. Also although Hitoshi is one of my least favorite charcters, I'm excited to see what you do with him in the future. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whats Izuku's quirk now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eri? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() an incredible read. I eagerly await more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yes. Just what I needed. |
![]() ![]() I've got to say, I've been enjoying the HELL out of this story. Honestly, I'm not even a fan of "My Hero Academia", it's just that good. I can't wait to see what happens next. One quick thought on Himiko Toga. Not to worry, I read your author's note and I completely understand and agree with your point, she's out of her mind and not someone Izuku would ever accept as a girlfriend. That being said, I could definitely see things going a slightly different way. What if Himiko becomes obsessed/infatuated with her boss, Mr. Moriarty? While I can't see Izuku accepting her as a girlfriend, I could definitely see his alter-ego treating her as a side-piece/pity fuck. If Himiko became infatuated with Moriarty, I would think it reasonable for him to "throw her a bone" so to speak and just have sex with her once in a while just to keep her happy/productive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, this is "Anime World."May I share your story on YouTube with an audience that prefers listening over reading. Channel link: Animeworldfanfic I will give proper credit in the description of your story, will also share video link under your story review for your view and we respect authors and their copyright. If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am ready to make changes according to your preferences. I would appreciate your cooperation. Please reply at your earliest convenience with permission. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i loved it all |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like this story is a metaphor for what you the author are skillfully doing with your words to have me cheering for this villain, and enjoying it. Love the consequences (and explanation of those consequences) being levied upon AFO/Shigaraki. Love the continued humanization of Izuku as a man with his own morals. Really relishing this story so far. |