Reviews for The Criminal Consultant
GRIMMReader91 chapter 1 . 5/18/2024
can't wait for what happens next
Luciendar chapter 11 . 5/17/2024
I'm extremely curious what you have planned next. Though you've made a few distasteful choices simply to achieve the effect you wished for, I still believe this story was a great one. I'd love to read more. Best of luck.
Luciendar chapter 8 . 5/17/2024
Despite my gripes, I've really enjoyed this story. I love the idea of evil genius Izuku. However, Izuku being an evil genius doesn't mean much if you're just going to turn Nezu into an idiot and the UA faculty into bigots.
Luciendar chapter 7 . 5/17/2024
Uraraka's quirk doesn't work like that. That was ridiculous. She should've stomped Kirishima.
Luciendar chapter 6 . 5/17/2024
Yeah, you went with Kirishima. How dull. Oh well, it's the only thing so far I haven't cared for in this story.
Luciendar chapter 5 . 5/17/2024
Great story here. It's a bit broken up, but solid.

I'm curious about who has OFA. At first, before reading anything other than the intro I figured it was either Mirio(the default choice) or Melissa. The you had the USJ fight and I got to wandering if it was Kirishima, since I doubt he could actually tank the Nomu with his hardening quirk. Honestly, I hope that was a red herring. I don't like Kirishima because I find him to be fake and a hanger on, just like Bakugo's middle school buddies.

If I was going to pick one at random though, I'd want it to be Ashido. One, having a someone with suc blaring mutations as a potential next number one hero would be good for the country. Two, Ashido has the positive energy that is great for heroics. Three, as seen in a flashback, she's willing to put herself in danger to protect others.

Not trying to convince you to use her, just explaining my reasoning for thinking she'd be good.
Knightmare Lord chapter 11 . 5/5/2024
So is Endeavor just dead now?
biob1 chapter 11 . 4/22/2024
Good work
biob1 chapter 9 . 4/22/2024
Liking this
NebulaNomad chapter 3 . 4/15/2024
Eh, an'daming OPM karakter, ba't wala sa crossover to?
Hindi ako masyadong fan ng crossover, kaya hanggang dito nalang ako. Gusto ko lang na malaman mo na, Na enjoy ko yung Chapter 1 at 2, Kaya salamat 3
NebulaNomad chapter 2 . 4/15/2024
Haha bigla nalang nang hina si Orpos.
Na umay ako habang ini-imagine ko yung pag dila ni Orpos dun sa plema niya, pero tang'na deserve mo yan haha.

Nadismaya ako sayo InkoBumukod kana Izuku, marae ka naman ng pera.
NebulaNomad chapter 1 . 4/15/2024
Grabeh tibok ng puso ko nung akala ko na magpapakamatay si Izuku
Ericaldrius chapter 4 . 4/14/2024
Fun Fact!

A group of hyenas is called a cackle, not a pack.

The more useless trivia you know!
gunman chapter 6 . 4/11/2024
All Might messed up. That's a given. Which only means he is human and not perfect. Still, we all know that it was pretty hypocritical of him saying that to Izuku, as he himself was once quirkless. But unlike All Might, Izuku rose himself up to where he is after the cruelty of the world hurting him so much.

And Power Loader, can't really blame him. He was only doing the right and proper thing as a teacher. Trying to guide Mei so that she didn't do something wrong, like hurt herself or blow up the lab, repeatedly.
Though, Mei seems to have an obvious flaw in her moral compass, at least she honestly loves Izuku and is happy.

And Kirishima is All Mights successor, huh?
It was never stated directly but the few hints here and there seem to make it kinda obvious.

And Tsukauchi and Nighteye are working together to locate and identify Moriarty. I have to wonder, exactly what Nighteye saw. It could be interrupted as anything really. Izuku is kinda walking a fine line between good and bad, but at the same time seems to be doing alot of good too.
Considering the major problem with society is corruption and not crime.
It seems that not alot of people see that.

And Endeavor getting a slap to the face and a punch in the gut was fun to see.

Write on.
gunman chapter 5 . 4/11/2024
The first thing to take from this, is that Tsukauchi doesn't really see the big picture. But that's understandable given he's no idea of the ramifications of his actions. He knows there is something wrong, but he's kinda barking up the wrong tree.
Probably not even in the right forest.
He's practically a rule-breaker here while his boss is trying to stay within the lines. Probably under Moriarty influence.
But I'm concerned he doesn't realize the mess he'll create for himself and the heroes as well as the police if he does bust Moriarty.
I've already read Chapter 1, so...the fact that they have Izuku means they know. But... are they prepared for the fallout without having Moriarty behind the reigns of the Underworld?

Second thing is Katsuki getting what is coming to him. I really pity his mom, having to deal with this. Katsuki got beat up and will be tormented for years to come. Plus the guy he tormented is now rich and famous which is what he wanted and won't ever get. Must be frustrating as hell.

Third, Izuku and Mei finally did it. Wish we could have read that lemon, but good he's got someone super cute and loving in his corner.

Fourthly, going after A-Train, huh? That mean we're going to see other members of the Seven taken out as well? That would be interesting.
We've already seen other characters from One Punch Man in this, so throwing in other characters from other fandoms would be awesome.

Write on.
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