This was a masterpiece to me, sad it's getting a rewrite but I'll await for it to return

Carajo, convertiste al protagonista en un puto Adolf Hitler como llegaste a esos extremos?

So is Ki and Spiritual Energy the same here or seperate terms?

REMAKE THIS NOW! PLEASE?! ITS AWESOME!

yeah you've ruined this. its 80% women 20% plot now... thats whats wrong with harem novels almost all of yhem end up doing the same thing

ugh. I'm fine with a harem I just hope all thr dates and shit are orf screen... when harem novels get too into dates they seem to ignore the story and just focus on the women.

ok

you know it's an anime world when even the robots monologue

found you thru another writer's recommendation. I'm also supposed to call you a tiny ankle biter. their words, not mine.

Best read yet.

I don't have any cheat Powers
proceeds to explain all of his cheat powers

Bruh :( you cockblocked me with a cliffhanger *cries* it got to the good part tooooo, hopefully you are well and continue making stories, tbh this is the first story that I've seen that is quite different compared to the others I very much liked it

This started out as a good story but then the main character turned out to be extremely racist, like Adolf Hitler vs Jews level of racism it’s hard to keep reading.

this story was so good thoooo, ciel was an amazing character too, mainly his inner struggle and how he copes with it, it felt real and like an actual reaction to a traumatic event

holy shit that's a lot of writing