Reviews for Hadrian Stark - Creating Avalon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So you create an OC and give him Harry Potter's name. Make him crazy powerful and immortal, and then nerf him into the ground so he's on the same level he would be on if he never had a past life? What's the point of calling this a crossover when you create not-Harry and then don't even use HP magic? This is just some old dude who got reincarnated in GoT basically. |
![]() ![]() Give the giants slings. They basically become walking catapults |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol take me to your leader?! Here's wanting to meet the Martians of |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent finally somebody has given the Giants actual armour and weapons There's a YouTube I watched once you specialise in mediaeval weaponry he discussed what you would give a fantasy giant is armour and it was mainly spiked shoes they thought would probably be the most efficient while holding 2 big shields just having stamp will kick everything to death I love chapters that is a form of recap |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing chapter! I’m most eager to read ahead… |
![]() ![]() This is a bit of a filler chapter. Well written but doesn’t really have much substance. Looking forward to more chapters! |
![]() ![]() Enjoyed story and this is a slow build to what? Story kept me interested, great job. Some fanfiction just fail in this aspect of a slow build but your doing a fine job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao, Arya already knows what she doesn't want. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you give Hadrian a katana? Firstly they don’t exist in the asoiaf world and secondly its a really useless weapon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For the record, read how Benjen mocks and humiliates Jon in the books at the feast. He manipulates the kid into joining the Night's Watch then ignores him entirely. Also, at the same feast he dresses more fancily than Ned does at court. I don't believe Benjen went willingly or happily to the Night's Watch in the books, I think Ned made him go because of something to do with Lyanna. But that is the books and this is your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Hope Harry does help Shireen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter i hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hadrian aint going lol. If you aint the North. You dirt in his eyes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter inhope you update soon |