Theirs a few things that just don’t make any sense what kind of curse was hermione in? How long has she been married? How long ago was the war? You know things like that but all in all great story:)

This is really confusing

The amount of confusion I feel, Im only on the first chapter. But the amount of missing detail, and who's pov it is. What the heck is going on, why is Hermione acting very out of character. Why does it bother her that Harry doesn't wear glasses, what is going on again. I like SB/HG pairing and this plotline had potential but I feel having a beta would of been wise.

I was so sorry to hear about your father. I know it's been some time now but the pain stays. Lost my dad 18 years ago and still miss him.
I really loved your story and know it would have ended differently without those major events in your life. I'm glad you got the last out, the way you were feeling. Thank you.

So cute

Awww, I love it! Snape is Hermione's step-dad!

This gets boring very quickly. You need to find a way to spruce it up. Plus it's unnecessarily complicated.

Draco is Sirius’s cousin, not nephew.

Goyle’s first name is Gregory. Vincent is Crabb’s name.

Billus? Really? Here did you get that ridiculous name from? Bill’s name is William.

So far this isn’t making any sense, I’m holding out hope that it will get better in later chapters. And Crookshanks is a boy!

lol. fabulous story! I love over protective Sirius:)

Yes! I read this years ago... And was delightfully surprised to see it was finished. It's like Christmas!

This is a confusing fic. I think this should all be one chapter, especially the way things are going. So she wakes up with memories of only until her fifth year, ... And then they fill her in? What kind of story is this?

This is probably the worst story I've ever read. Honestly I'd put the plot line and writing quality right up there with My Immortal yet somehow this story is worse because the writer is genuine about it.