chapter 4 is so great and I know chapter 5 will be great to can't wait till Friday I will review about chapter 5 on Friday I love all the harry potter movies I just love it this is one of the coolest stories ever so great thank you and see you on Friday

Nice chapter. Though Michael's first crush came as a surprise to me. I would've thought Cho would be Michael's first crush. Or that's what I thought when I read the summary.

But luckily, I have a love for the unexpected. Keep up the good work.

chapter 4 is great I can hardly wait for chapter 5 next Friday this is so good coolest ever you are doing such a great job so thank you and looking forward to reading chapter 5 next Friday so thank you so much

I just wanted to send you another review before tomorrow's chapter is updated so cool in fact cooler than cool I absolutely love it can't wait to read chapter 4 just to let you know this is one of my favorite stories so thank you I also look forward to read new stories that you will update as soon as you can I love all your stories thank you and see you tomorrow

oh wow tomorrow's the big day I am so excited to read chapter 4 can't wait to see what happens I am so loving it this story is so great oh in the harry potter and the sorcerers stone when it was coming the end I loved when harry called he who must not be named a liar and you know what it's true he was lying I knew he wasn't really going to help bring Harry's mom and dad back I would call you know who a dirty rotten lying jerk so I wanted to thank you so much for the story it is awesome I give a big thumbs up thank you and see you tomorrow

oh boy so excited about the day after tomorrow and this weekend I will get to read chapter 4 of the potter twins and the philosopher Stone's so cool and one of the greatest I love every minute of the story and I am excited for more and more to learn what happens next oh I enjoyed sonic the other day and how was your labor day weekend we haven't been to Wendy's to try the French toast yet but I hope to soon also I love all your stories period they rock so hard thank you so much and see you Friday

loving the potter twins and the philosopher Stone's it is so cool one of the best awesome amazing wonderful one of the coolest stories ever I hope you are having a good labor day weekend because I sure am my mom and I were going to drive through sonic I love their burgers and fries oh have you heard that Wendy's has new French toast stick I can hardly wait to try those so I was wondering I have watching some episodes of Naruto on my kindle it is one of my favorite shows have you ever seen any Naruto or Naruto shippuden episodes anyway thank you so much for the story I can't wait for more so thank you and see you Friday Saturday and Sunday

oh this story is so great as well I look forward to every Friday to new chapters about Harry and Michael and all their friends so will Michael have a girlfriend I think that will be really sweet I think this is also one of my favorite stories it is cool awesome amazing and wonderful in fact all your stories that you have updated and the stories that you will update are wonderful thank you and can't wait till next Friday

oh so cool I love this chapter it is so interesting I think it is one of the best but I wish they could have put Michael in the movies anyway also very excited to read tomorrow's chapter 39 and Sunday's chapter 40 for titans elemental so thank you also I am sorry that it will take a long time for the secret Saturday's to be updated I am also sorry I keep on going on about it I just get so excited I am also excited to read my idea for it but could you please keep me posted on when you update it and thank you so much for chapter 4 next Friday see you tomorrow

Another great chapter. Sad story about James and Lily, but a great first night at Hogwarts. Happy to see both brothers in Gryffindor. My favorite house. Nice name for the ferret too. Keep up the good work.

The Potter Twin's and the Philosopher Stone's

Conventionally in US and UK English, plurals do not use apostrophes, so

The Potter Twins and the Philosopher's Stones

and the boy's - boys - plural

to get the boy's to safety - boys - plural

little tyke's - tykes - plural

the boy's aunt - boys' aunt - possessive of the plural

etc etc etc

Sorry, but it's unreadable to me.

Maye get a beta for ehe English grammar.

well tomorrow's Friday and chapter 3 will be updated then the day after that chapters 39 and 40 for titans elemental will be updated I have been looking forward to them all week and now it will soon happen I will update to you on chapter 3 when I get done reading it also Halloween is next month it's also my grandpa's birthday on the 4th of October I miss him and on Sunday this last week I was thinking about him I got a little sad it's been a year since his passing it will take me time to get over it so thank you and I will see you tomorrow

really love the potter twins and the philosopher stone I have seen all the Harry potter movies oh tell me with harry potter movie do you like Halloween is coming up soon it's one of my favorite times of the year before my dad passed away Halloween was always his favorite time of the year he loved to watch scary movies but I love the Disney channel Halloween town Halloween town 2 kalabars revenge Halloween town high and return to Halloween town movies my daddy's favorite movie was hocus pocus and I love it to my big sister jasmine and I use to watch every year when we were kids anyway I love this story and so excited for Friday thank you

Nice second chapter. And nice of you to give Michael a ferret. They may be little stinkers, but they do have such cute faces. Keep up the good work.

oh man I love this chapter and Michael getting a pet ferret that is such a cool idea I can hardly wait for chapter 3 next Friday also I look forward to reading when Harry and Michael defeats he who must not be named so thank you and I am so excited to read the secret Saturday's when it's updated thank you again