Reviews for Saga of the Sun and Moon
Gracen1b8 chapter 1 . 5/27
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ChloeBenjamin chapter 1 . 4/26
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isaacnwafora chapter 49 . 4/14
I must say this was a surprising and intriguing Chapter. can't wait to see what the Dai Li has in store for Azula.

update Soonest
DD chapter 49 . 4/8
Sokka has a super sense of smell.
Azula chapter 49 . 4/8
The Day of Black Sun?

Hahn is Azula's contact.

Katara and Aang stopped the drill.

Sokka's blood burns metal and melts flesh.

The Earth King has invited Azula to lake Laogai.
Data Seeker chapter 49 . 4/7
Hi

Nice update.

The continuation with Team Avatar is good, full of depth, complexity, scope and detail.

The continuation with the Kyoshi Warriors and Team Azula is good.

The intrigue in Ba Sing Se is very complex, suspenseful and dramatic. The various trivia on warfare, the Void, Sokka's spirit powers and such are good.

Nice cliffhanger.

The wholesome standards are high. I look forward to your update. God bless

Data Seeker
lunaspark149 chapter 1 . 1/24
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Angel chapter 48 . 9/7/2024
Espero con ansias la próxima actualización, es interesante, una perspectiva diferente, no abandones la historia, es demasiado buena como para que quede en el olvido.
Azula chapter 48 . 8/12/2024
Are Azula and her friends going to become Kyoshi Warriors?

What happened to the bandits?
Data Seeker chapter 48 . 8/8/2024
Hi

Nice update/continuation. It's great how similar but different it is from the canon.

The part with the sandbenders and how after failing to catch Appa, they catch Zuko instead and Sokka goes to the rescue.

The characterization and details are great. The others are in the library and can't wait and Toph is at a disadvantage due to her blindness and being in a desert, thus Sokka goes alone. Logical.

And Sokka taking on Koh's mantle, the Void was very dark, suspenseful and intense. He saves Zuko and doesn't show the enemies mercy. And the ambiguity of their fate was great, and when rejoining the others who ask if they will find bodies, Zuko says "There are no bodies."

We all know what that means.

The brief continuation with Team Azula with the Kyoshi Warriors was good too.
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I hope you like this review. God bless

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isaacnwafora chapter 47 . 5/21/2024
Update
viego martes chapter 47 . 4/18/2024
more pls
Shadow Stalker chapter 47 . 2/21/2024
Who is the Lightbringer?
Azula chapter 47 . 2/19/2024
Lightbringer?

Smellerbee is a girl.

What is Zhao planning to do?

It was time for Ozai to try to improve his public image.
Pomni chapter 46 . 2/19/2024
The giggles?
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