Well, Daniel is not handling it very well. He seems to be heading down a dark road. And Dumbledoor still thinks that Harry and Sirius are dark, really? Has the old man finally gone senile? But, then again, he is writing in Riddle's diary, so that maybe the case.

it feels like the only reason a pre-planned trip that Dumbledore is made aware of is even in the story is so you can somehow (again terrible security) pass the information on and have yet another attack on Harry/Hermione without anyone being able to fight back against the bad guys.

Seriously... Someone tells Dumbledore. Dumbledore Tells Snape. Snape Tells Pettigrew. Pettigrew tells ?. And then, I assume we'll have 50 or more hitherto unknown death eaters attacking them.

Way too convoluted and way beyond what I consider the limits of my ability to suspend my belief. I really hope you change the core of this upcoming attack to something else.

Please write the next chapter already. I really appreciate it and enjoyed the ending of the chapter where Winky throws Crouch Jr. Out the window. Thank you very much.

exciting

Nice chapter.

Wonderful update
Dumbledore that old coot! As for Daniel he’s just a sad little boy who wants to be more than what he is.
Thanks so much for sharing
Gloria

Dumbledore and Daniel are really unhinged.

I love this story! while i normally love the Potters I hate what they have done to Harry. But of course I love Sirius but feel sorry for him losing his friends. I hope things work out for them all in the end. Except for Dumbledore of course lol

Love The story so far I hope that Lily and James will be able to pull their heads out of their collective asses and realize that they screwed up. I would love to see Daniel throwing a gigantic hissy fit about the fact that the prophecy wasn't about him and it was about Harry and Lily finally having an up and slap him upside the head while Albus has a mental breakdown because he was wrong and his mind breaks because in his world he can never be wrong

Oh I am so glad that my brother recommended this story to me. Very well done.

Suckers to be Dumbles... of course it was Harry and ICCS.
No amount of pleading for forgiveness is going to get Dumbles or the Potters our of the hole they have dug for Britain.

This was great so far. I can't wait to read more of this.

I love this story.

My jaw dropped at the end !

Daaamnnn. Yeah Wandwood for the win! So glad ceddy went with them!